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Tarnished Angels (SMM Universe) Section 1

Title: Tarnished Angels
Pairing: Min/Other

Section Rating: PG-13
Overall Rating: NC-17
Blame: ranalore

Summary: Hot Korean boys. A seduction. An alluring. A temptation. And Min's self-discovery.

Related Fics: So Much Mine and Lavender Bunny. Links go to PDFs. Other related fics can be found at my LJ: wedspawn



Suffering.

The first of the Four Noble Truths spoke of an awareness of suffering. Every phase of life and living brought suffering. The way Changmin felt at the moment, he would be a Buddha by the coming dawn.

Every single cell of his body hurt, down to the hair around his belly button. Slumped down on the couch in the living room, Min stared at the kitchen entrance, wondering who moved it so far away. His aching legs resented the distance. His growling stomach resented his legs.

Tokyo’s moon was somewhere beyond the wall of lights and rain outside of the slender pane of glass that ran from the ceiling to nearly the floor. Changmin often strained to see the night sky, looking for a hint of black amid the wash of brilliance but the city was too flamboyant in her dress. There was very little quiet in the skies, especially in the evening when the Japanese seemed desperate to cram as much living into every second. It made for a very hectic noise in his life.

Min shook his head, working his fingers through the tangle of his hair. The tight braids done over his scalp pulled the skin too taut, and he’d nearly cried with relief when the stylist undid the cornrows. The Gods were sure to show him what suffering truly was, starting with the removal of his skin from the top on down. Changmin was fairly certain the braids were a divine sign for him to stop whining and push forward.

After all, pushing forward is what was expected of him.

There had been moments when he thought he would collapse, beaten down by the schedule or the rigors of their routines. Min battled for his health, taking care to eat and to sleep when he could. The drawn, paleness of Jaejoong’s face often was enough of a warning sign for him. In recent days, he tried to shed the sullen selfishness he knew he harboured in his personality, often placing food directly in front of his older/youngest brother to implore Jae to take care of himself.

A healthy Jaejoong, curiously exotic and talkative, would become the spotlight again and their group would be balanced again. It was only natural, Min reminded himself, for all of Junsu’s talk of charisma, it was their Joongie that drew the eye or the ear. The fans here encouraged the intimacies of the group, and Changmin once again became aware of his place as Go, the fifth member offsetting an ill-omened number.

Rubbing at his scalp, Changmin listened to the silence in the house. The others hadn’t yet come back from the show. They’d be late, he told himself. If he saw them before morning it would be a surprise. Ordering his legs to hold his own weight, he stood, nearly losing his balance as his thigh muscles gave out under him. Steadying himself with a hand on the back of the couch, Min shuffled towards the kitchen, too tired and hungry at the moment to care about much of anything other than sleep and food.

The ice box held nothing that interested him and the pantry offered little more than dehydrated noodles and canned vegetables. Tossing a handful of somen into a pot of boiling water, Min used another saucepan to make a dashi broth, mincing slightly wilted green onions to throw into the soup. Scrambling an egg, he let the heat cook the strands as he dribbled the mixture into the heated broth. Tossing the rinsed noodles into a wide mouthed bowl, Changmin poured the soup over the somen then carefully carried his steaming food to the living room.

Falling into the sofa’s soft cushions, Min sighed at the weight of his fatigue in his bones. The show went well. Or at least he thought it did. Yunho probably had other ideas but as far as Changmin was concerned, he held up his end of the performance. The warm broth would go a long way in soothing his aching vocal cords, and quell the roaring beast in his stomach.

Dipping a spoon into the broth, Min brought the fragrant soup to his lips, closing his eyes and murmuring in pleasure at the heat. The quiet of the house let him eat slowly and in peace, no rush to be somewhere other than the soft feather-top mattress in his room. Chewing on a mouthful of noodles, he heard his phone chime and ignored it, wanting to be left alone for the moment.

Adulthood wasn’t everything he hoped for. He still was fighting with a growling jealousy in his heart. Not towards any of the members. He’d long forgiven Yoochun for stealing Junsu’s heart and had begged forgiveness from Jae for the harsh, hurtful words he’d flung at the older singer. Their relationships had settled after the seething time of adjustment and things between the five were flowing evenly and happily.

“Then why is there an ache in my soul?” Changmin asked the empty room.

He was tired of being alone.

Pushing the noodles away, the young man raised his arms over his head and stretched out his back, hearing the pop of her spine as his muscles gave way under the motion.

Watching the four become twos hurt. Not for lack of love from one of them but rather just the lack itself. The enormity of that realization hit Min hard. He was still too untried for his liking, no longer innocent in the ways of the world but with a burning desire to plunge headlong into life.

He’d always been one for knowledge, Min smiled as he dumped the remaining noodles into the disposal.

Min knew his lust for learning served him well. He used it to push himself into the limelight to become a part of the group. And again when he needed to alter his image, the cute and innocent persona deftly stolen by Junsu, Min worked to become the scholar, the too serious one with an occasional smile coaxed from one of the older singers.

When they’d first been told of the move to Japan, Changmin first thought of the waste of his scholastic endeavors, cursing that the university he worked so hard to get into had to fall to the wayside for his career. Relegated to the back of the group with a increasing attention given to a coyly placed and popular YunJae, Min searched for a way to become relevant, coming back again to his propensity for learning quickly.

He was the first among his group to gain fluency, diving headlong into words to explore their meanings. Jae followed along behind him. At first, Min wasn’t sure if the older singer was a savvy manipulator or there was just something inside of the mercurial young man’s brain that sparked alive when Jae needed something.

After spending years with Kim Jaejoong, Min discovered Jae worked hard at things in his own way, delving into social situations Changmin would never had dared. Jae would be the first one to ask someone on the street for directions, clarifying each word with a shy smile and a dab of his tongue along his lips. Sensual and erotic, Jaejoong was a study for Changmin who struggled with presenting a more aloof image.

Aloof and goofy seemed to work for Jaejoong. The juxtaposition of the two concepts boggled Changmin’s mind. The mystery of its success made it a puzzle worth studying.

He could do mysterious. Min knew he leaned towards being quiet and he used that to his advantage, sitting back to watch the others as they gamboled through interviews and drove themselves to exhaustion during rehearsals. Relaxing among the members was easy. Alone with the five gave him comfort and security. He would need both during their time in Japan.

Despite his assertion that he was an adult, Min was still a young man that was much too far away from home. The members gave him the feeling of family. He came to rely on that feeling. It was the only sense of anchor he had at the moment.

His phone demanded his attention again, chirruping loudly. Thinking it was one of the hyungs, Changmin picked it up, answering in a low drawl, teasing out the salutation.

“You were good tonight.”

It was a sultry purr. Min could hear the swagger in the man’s voice. Hell, his groin felt it as well.

“You saw us.”

“I saw you.”

Electricity poured into Min’s body, setting him on edge. Turning the phone away from his mouth so the other man wouldn’t hear him pant, Changmin took a deep breath before answering.

“How did you see us? It wasn’t televised.” Min licked at his parched lips, swallowing hard at the dryness in his throat.

“There was a live feed over here.” Another purr and the sound of a sip, the other man’s sigh of satisfaction from his drink. “I had to chase everyone out of the room so I could watch you by myself.”

Trailing a finger over his aching thigh muscle, Changmin struggled to keep his voice calm. “I’m not exactly the most charismatic on the stage. The others must have kept you much more entertained.”

“Ah, Minku,” The drawl caught on a dark hitch, erotic and thrilling. “You have no idea how entertaining watching you can be.”

“I don’t know what that word is.” The unfamiliar Japanese sounded like an endearment but knowing the other’s contrary nature, it could very well be something mocking. “Minku.”

“You’re saying it wrong.” The other man said it again, purring it out slowly. “The ‘ku’ should leave your mouth like you’re waiting for a kiss. And if I was there, I’d be glad to show that very delicious mouth of yours how to say it, Minku.”

“Why are you doing this?” Min blurted out.

“Doing what, pretty?” Changmin heard another sip, a quenching from across the ocean.

“Call me here and… saying the things you are saying.” The young man replied. “I don’t know why continue to tease me.”

“Teasing you? Or watching you gyrate on the screen? Did you know that with the right electronics you can slow a live feed or even stop it on a spot that is really interesting?” Listening to Min’s shallow breathing, the man continued. “I spent a lot of my time with the remote on slow. And my hand, well… let’s just say that it was no where near that remote. I had better things to wrap my fingers around.”

“You’re insane.” Min found his voice, stumbling over his words. His mind was nearly white with the images of the other man’s hands roaming over a hard body. Reaching for the glass of water on the coffee table, Min took a tentative sip, almost choking when the other man let out a soft moan when he heard Changmin swallow.

The phone shook in Min’s hand when the other spoke. “You have no idea how much I want to be whatever it is that you’re drinking.”

“Now I know you’re insane.” Changmin replied, keeping his voice light. “So you called just to tell me you watched our show?”

“I called to tell you I watched you.” A heavy sigh rattled the other’s voice. “I wanted you to know that.”

“Thanks.” Min said. “I guess.”

He could do mysterious. Of course he could, Changmin reassured himself. He was doing mysterious now. He was being aloof.

Then why, the child in him mocked, did he feel like every nerve in his body was on fire and that he was about to jump into an endless abyss filled with more suffering than he could bear?

Because, the rational part of his brain responded, the man he spoke to was far more dangerous than anything or anyone he’d ever dealt with before. It was good to be cautious about falling for the sensual darkness the other promised. His heart was too young to be broken.

Bullshit, his body responded. Once again, his basest desires overruled any further discussion. It all came down to the carnal. No matter how enlightened he might want to be, his body always responded with what was a final argument.

What the hell are we waiting for?

Changmin had no answer for his body’s prodding and his mind had gone strangely silent, as if protesting being vetoed by his flesh.

“You still there, Minku?” The other asked softly, hearing the young singer’s breath catch. “There you are. I was wondering if you fell asleep on me. Not that you falling asleep on me would be a bad thing. I’d just prefer you doing that with me underneath you and not thousands of miles away.”

“We’re only a little over 700 miles apart. Not thousands.”

“It seems like we’re thousands of miles away when all I’m left with to stare at is a television screen frozen with your half-naked body on it.”

Changmin’s soft intake of air brought ice into his lungs and Min could swear he heard the other smile through the phone line. His breath was nearly steady when the man purred with a silky nonchalance that unnerved Min to his core.

“When you dance and lift your arms, there was a slice of your skin peeking out from under your shirt.” The other man inhaled, the familiar sound of a cigarette being lit and a drag being taken from its end. “The first time it happened, that’s when I had to chase everyone out of the room.”

“The second time it happened,” The silk became velvet, a rough lick of a tongue on Changmin’s fraught nerves. “I had to stop the frame and…”

He let his voice trail off, hoping the younger man would follow the thought. “Do you know how long it took me before I could breathe again, Minku? Before I could even trust myself to walk again?”

“No.” Min whispered, not trusting himself to speak. A rush of heat enflamed Changmin’s face, his nipples hardening beneath the thin cotton shirt he’d pulled on once he got home.

“They should make you lift your arms more often, Minku.” The man said. “Or better yet, I could lift them for you. The television screen doesn’t taste as well as I imagine you taste. Do you taste good, Minku?”

“I don’t know.” Min’s voice lowered, a rolling husky sound in the other man’s ears. “I can’t…you…”

“I sit here sometimes and think about how you taste. Especially after tonight.”

“To me you look like you could taste like unsipped sin.” The other said, not giving Changmin’s brain time to recover before it was thrown into a maelstrom of unbidden sexy thoughts. “I want to teach you how to sin, Minku.”

“I know about sin.” Min replied hotly. He wouldn’t admit to being too innocent, especially not to the man on the other side of the phone.

“You think you know because you read and watch.” The other man sounded amused, low laughter turning his tone into an erotic splash. “But you won’t know sin and temptation until you have someone to teach you. Someone who knows what sin feels like. Someone who knows how to draw out temptation until you can’t think.”

“And I’m the one to teach you those things, Minku.” Another purr and the hint of a kiss at the end of the unfamiliar word. “You should learn about how hoarse your voice can get from screaming with pleasure, not just from singing. Your body should hurt in places that even your dancing can’t touch. There are parts of you that should throb, parts that are deep inside of you that I would take my time exploring.”


“You need to be taught those things, pretty.” The other man said. “You should learn those things underneath me, Minku.”

“I need.. to go to bed.” Changmin needed to sleep. Fatigue bored down into his limbs and sand crusted over his eyelids but he knew he would end up staring up at the ceiling, his hands moving over his bare stomach and thinking about the other’s fingers and mouth on him.

“You run off then, Min-min.” The other laughed. “Think of me before you go to sleep. Dream of me when you finally do get to sleep because I’ll be thinking of you. I’ll be thinking of wanting you. Of having you.”

“I’m not running off.” Changmin refuted. “I just need…time to think.”

“I’ll give you that time, Minku.” The other whispered, hot and wet in Min’s ear. “But not too long. Japan, as you say, isn’t that far away. And I don’t want to let anyone else sip at the sin that you have hidden under that placid, quiet mask of yours.”

“Good night, Min-ah.” He took another hit off of his cigarette, a rushing sound loud in Min’s ear. “I hope your dreams of me keep you awake for a very long time.”

“Good night, Dong-wook.” Closing his phone, Min sighed, his parting words unheard through the broken connection. “And I want to sin with you. I just don’t want to lose myself doing so.”

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herokun
Jun. 1st, 2007 09:07 am (UTC)
I haven't read the whole fic yet. I just rolled it down to the end, and I see a name....

WUD??????????????????

Dong Wook???????????

Seven??????????

*dies*

You've never failed in making me surprised!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LMAO

Oh my gosh!!!!!!!!

BRB to read you fic!

wedspawn
Jun. 1st, 2007 03:19 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥ yes, seven. snookies! i'm glad you liked that it was seven! :) ::::makes room on couch::::
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orionsroad
Jun. 1st, 2007 10:27 am (UTC)
Ah! It was Dongwook! Hahaha, neh Min, you caught yourself (or uh, got caught) by a handsome one. ^_^

I like his thoughts about trying to find a place in the group, now that the others have settled into their 'pairings'. His little musings about Jae's strange dichotomy of being aloof yet goofy I find very true - I dunno how Jae does it either, but it certainly works for him.

Lovely work as always, I really enjoy reading your fics, they flow through the mind so easily.
wedspawn
Jun. 1st, 2007 03:23 pm (UTC)
thank you so much! ♥ i am glad you liked it.

i had to really find someone that would work with min. i wanted someone who could be a bit goofy but still very sensual and serious. someone who could teach min and then in turn, be taught as well. :) ♥

thank you again! snooks.
jounin002
Jun. 1st, 2007 11:55 am (UTC)
SPOT!
wedspawn
Jun. 1st, 2007 03:25 pm (UTC)
:::makes room on couch:::: ♥♥♥♥
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ladybug2199
Jun. 1st, 2007 12:03 pm (UTC)
You started Minnie's fic...best graduation gift ever.
Seven...didn't see that one coming. Wow...wonder what the others will say considering Seven is an older man and way more experience than their little Minnie.
wedspawn
Jun. 1st, 2007 03:26 pm (UTC)
ah, that is a conundrum! seven's age compared to min and how the others will feel. :) ♥♥♥ and congrats on your graduation! i'm assuming you graduated.

i hope you liked it. we'll see where it goes. i had fun with this part.

snookies and thank you for reading! again! still! ♥
cluvy
Jun. 1st, 2007 02:03 pm (UTC)
I'M SQUEALING LOOKING AT IT POP UP ON MY FRIENDS' PAGE! be back for a coherent comment XD
wedspawn
Jun. 1st, 2007 03:30 pm (UTC)
:::makes room on couch and offers up cocoa::: ♥♥♥
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snowpiggie
Jun. 1st, 2007 02:13 pm (UTC)
YAY!! Minnie's story is starting. Thank you thank you!

Dongwook!?! I thought it was some Japanese singer or actor from the little preview chapter you gave us last month. Intriguing, I hope you'll tell us how it all started =P. I can't wait to see the other 4 reactions since I'm pretty sure they are protective of Minnie.
wedspawn
Jun. 1st, 2007 03:31 pm (UTC)
ah, only that the guy spoke fluent japanese, which seven does...or well the info i had said he does :) he's going to now at the very least :) ♥♥♥

min will probably keep it a secret for a bit. :::grins::: he's sneaky.

i'm glad you liked it! many hugs and thank you! ♥
arsonist_ed
Jun. 1st, 2007 02:25 pm (UTC)
Oh, maaaan. Dong Wook? Se7en? OMFG, you're kidding me! That's such a surprise, maaaan.

I would've never thought it was him. And I'm such a fan of him.

Your way of writing tears me apart, maaaan. And I love it.

I will be waiting for your next update!
<333
wedspawn
Jun. 1st, 2007 03:32 pm (UTC)
ah, thank you so much! you will have to forgive me if i get him not quite right. i've done some research and i hope that i can portray seven well. :)

snookies and thank you! i appreciate your reading this! ♥♥♥
faricsyung
Jun. 1st, 2007 02:55 pm (UTC)
Frankly, I can never imagine SE7EN doing those kinds of talk. There's a concrete good image of him in my heart.

But I guess imaginations could play well. And imagining Choi Dongwook's other persona could be fun too.

I'll follow where you're leading.. because it's too intriguing not to. xD <3
wedspawn
Jun. 1st, 2007 03:35 pm (UTC)
oh he's good. he just likes what he sees. and well, he's drawn to min's innocence. maybe because seven's older now and min reminds him of what he was? :::grins:::

just because he's sensual doesn't mean he's not good. it just means he's... experienced. :) and he does care for min. he did after all watch the whole concert. and loves to tease :) ♥♥♥

and sometimes, it's good to be... erotic.
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xiao_tian_jelly
Jun. 1st, 2007 03:26 pm (UTC)
“Good night, Dong-wook.”

OK. That's asdfghjkl!@#$%^&* unexpected!!! WHEW!!!

I'm excited for the next part. *grabsyourcookies&goesbackhiding*

wedspawn
Jun. 1st, 2007 03:37 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥ hey, no leaving crumbs. :::hands over napkin::: ♥♥♥♥ i'm glad you liked it. ::::grins::: i am excited to see what's in the next part too. as soon as i write it. :D
jl2668
Jun. 2nd, 2007 12:56 am (UTC)
dongwook?!@
i would have never seen that coming..
but i'm wondering where he was when he was watching the concert that he had to chase everyone out of the room..
it could be that my knowledge of any other entertainment company besides sm is shot...^^

it's a wonderful start to another great story..
i'm off to read part 2..^^
wedspawn
Jun. 2nd, 2007 06:13 am (UTC)
oh no, there is always a way ::::grins::: ♥♥♥♥ never know what someone who can get anything he wants does to get what he wants :)

snookies and i hope you liked it! ♥ thank you for reading
already
Jun. 2nd, 2007 01:54 am (UTC)
SPOTTT! *curses at untimely impromptu shopping trip*
wedspawn
Jun. 2nd, 2007 06:30 am (UTC)
ah! love you! chus! ♥♥♥♥
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wedspawn
Jun. 2nd, 2007 06:39 am (UTC)
ah, go sleep! ♥♥♥♥ that's important!

snookies. and i'm glad you liked it. thank you! so much! many many hugs. ♥
theresa_lynne
Jun. 2nd, 2007 04:19 am (UTC)
Oh god. Nowaynowaynowayyyyy! *squeals* This is just too good of a fic. Min and SE7EN? *dies* How awesome you are.
wedspawn
Jun. 2nd, 2007 06:41 am (UTC)
ah, thank you! ::::offers cookies:::: ♥♥♥♥i am glad you liked it. thank you!

i adore the se7en :)
wmelon_kaiye
Jun. 2nd, 2007 01:29 pm (UTC)
LOL
LOL
LOL
sorry, I had to get out of my system first D=

You know, while I was reading this, my mediaplayer was churning out se7en&DBSK songs X333 HAHAHAH....
oh god...

WHY DOES SE7EN SOUND SO SEEDY? wait, nevermind ... (coughs) X3
yay for min! fic! (rejoices)

(runs off to read the next chappie)
wedspawn
Jun. 2nd, 2007 05:56 pm (UTC)
::::grins::: se7en isn't seedy. he's... well... okay a bit tempting fate there :)

::::hugs::: ♥♥♥ i'm glad you liked it and are reading :) ♥ snookies!
oldwillow_brook
Jun. 2nd, 2007 11:47 pm (UTC)
This week has been hell and now I finally have time to ReAD!

First: Finding out it was dongwook made me cry...FROM SHOCK! I seriously thought it was hyukjae just because...But then I realized Hyukjae doesnt speak japanese and Se7en did NOT pop into my head.

second:I CANT BELIEVE YOU UPDATED! Do you know how happy this makes me feel? I saw it on ___Hug (while all the windows were open) I Screamed bloody murder but couldnt read it because I was off to a concert at school..

Third: I love you....Love your writing...Love everything...*sigh*

I'm so behind! OFF TO CHAPTER TWO!!!!
wedspawn
Jun. 2nd, 2007 11:56 pm (UTC)
smooches! and hugs! ::::chus::: i'm working on three right now.

ah, seven. very controversial choice :) but a fun one i think. he's lovely to write and so far, just a scoundrel.

i'm glad you liked it. and are very happy the neighbours didn't think you were murdering someone :) ::::Grins:::

:::hugs::: and snookies.
prestonsbarr
Jun. 3rd, 2007 12:39 am (UTC)
YOU MUST KNOW I'M TRYING NOT TO SCREAM WITH MY NANA AND GRANDPA ONLY TWENTY FEET AWAY FROM ME!!! Omg I'm biting my finger from scream SE7EN?!?!?!?! I've been gone for a few days and one of my friends was flailing on my journal and she was liek "I KNEW IT WAS GOING TO BE HIM!!" but I wanted to see for myself and I'm just going nuts right now...

Oh my lord I needed this sooooo much. Changmin deserves so much from being left behind with the pairing.. but I'm just biased really.. but seriously.. DONGWOOK WILL BE AWESOME!!!! Omg I so love his sensual nature and oh my lord I can't even say how much I'm indebted to you!!! m(_ _)m This is just going to be brilliant and I'm sooooo excited..
wedspawn
Jun. 3rd, 2007 12:47 am (UTC)
aaaahhhh... seven :) yes, seven ::::grins:::

i hope that you like the sections. i just posted the third one. ::::grins:: and yes, no screaming to startle your nana and grandpa.

i think min needs some loving too :) ::::hugs:::

i am glad you are liking it. thank you. very much! :::::snookies:::
baby_jin
Jun. 3rd, 2007 09:27 am (UTC)
Ooh.. another fic!!

I'm glad that Min has a story as well. Ah so Se7en is his partner... Looks good. I think Min is better of with Dong Wook as his partner than somebody else.

I hope to see a bit of Yoosu here as well. XD
wedspawn
Jun. 3rd, 2007 05:03 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥ you shall see yoosu. ♥♥♥ promise :)

and thank you for reading! and yes, well, we'll see where it goes :) ♥

snookies. and hugs! ♥
xxcantchoosexx
Jun. 4th, 2007 05:16 pm (UTC)
WAH!!! Minnie!!!

x.X

I so did NOT expect that to be Seven.. Wow.. I'm stunned into fangirling... *SQUEAL*
wedspawn
Jun. 4th, 2007 05:28 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥ ah, yes... it is se7en,

thank you for fangirling :::grins:: we'll have to see where the story ends up :) snookies and thank you! ♥
arisu_22
Jun. 6th, 2007 03:42 am (UTC)
Yay min story^^ *happy dance* I knew it was going be Se7en...holy crap *is extremely happy* LUFF IT ^.^v
wedspawn
Jun. 6th, 2007 04:11 am (UTC)
♥♥♥ i am very happy you like it. thank you! smooches! ♥♥♥
lil_tvxqcamper
Jun. 6th, 2007 01:23 pm (UTC)
Woah! The long-awaited fic about changminnie, although he hurt because of Yoosu I do hpe he finds his happiness too mhm...
Well that was some information, the hell??? He's got some stalker and his stalker is Dong-Wook, as in Choi Dong-Wook aka Se7en? That seems pretty interesting...
Can't wait to find out more about it ^^
wedspawn
Jun. 6th, 2007 02:45 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥ ah, there are about five more sections :::grins::: ♥♥♥ we've not gotten far.

snookies. and thank you! i'm glad you're reading along! smooch!
imachang
Jun. 27th, 2007 11:18 pm (UTC)
I know you wrote that this was in the SMM Universe. Was there something leading up to the content of this chapter or was it kinda just out of the blue? It looks like there were two stories before this but was it up in the air as to who he might be with from previous stories?

I don't read fics very often anymore. I only started this one because Min-centric. Your writing is excellent so I'm hooked.
wedspawn
Jun. 27th, 2007 11:40 pm (UTC)
ah, river of kisses is the bridge between lavender bunny and tarnished angels. and the next chapter of TA explains how they met and how their relationship is established. :::nods::

i started off a little bit into their relationship and well, it goes from here. let me know how you like the story.

thank you for reading it! ♥♥♥
audient
Jul. 1st, 2007 04:03 pm (UTC)
...I know it's kind of pointless to leave section/section review now that you have 31 posted, but skhkjdlhfksjglksjdhksjdg

I still go O___O when I read se7en's name.

...

I mean hi. Goddamn, that was hot. I got HOT just reading it >_> It's got a very different feel compared to LB and/or SMM. LB is lighter and more playful, SMM more intense and serious. This one. Is just. Hot. *dies*

Kay, off to section 2 now.
wedspawn
Jul. 1st, 2007 05:46 pm (UTC)
go ahead. read away. i'll be here. :::grins:: ♥♥♥♥ this is definitely different. the style is much lighter and more seductive. :::hugs::: ♥♥♥
chloe1910
Dec. 8th, 2007 09:19 am (UTC)
Hehe, knew it was Dognwook from all the one-shots that you've written..
wedspawn
Dec. 8th, 2007 06:40 pm (UTC)
::::grins::: smooches!
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wedspawn
Dec. 16th, 2007 07:05 am (UTC)
aw, ::::hugs:::: ♥♥♥♥♥ the dinner scene! ::::grins::: smooches. it is gorgeous. thank you. ::::hugs:::: it's brilliant! thank you. snookies. :::hugs:::: ♥♥♥♥ ::::grins:::
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phantom_hollow
Dec. 16th, 2007 03:03 am (UTC)
Hello my dear~

Remember that fanvideo discussion on my lj? I present you Min7en :: TARNISHED ANGELS
And I didn't use a single song we both thought of. I used ANGELS by The Trax. It didn't turn out as well as I wanted but it did come out pretty good. I tried to include scenes that actually tied in too~

I uploaded it to Veoh, because Youtube is scary about fanvids but if you want it there I can up it, but you can also download it from Veoh if you want...

Please enjoy~ [and maybe i will do one for your jaeho and yoosu]

http://www.veoh.com/videos/v1646609aC2XxNCm

Recognising this place of memory
You, together with me
The dream that divided the stars
To catch sight of you from far away
He was also searching for your face
You fly away, and it's okay.
Because I watched intently, as your wings spread

Forever here
Now in my heart
Baby just wanna hold you
catch you in my hands
To see you every day

I recognised this place of memory
White as the clouds
Your clear, pure voice
To catch sight of you from far away
Catching you in my hands
I watch you fly, and it's okay.
Because I watched intently, as your wings spread

Forever here
Now in my heart
Baby just wanna hold you
catch you in my hands
To see you every day
wedspawn
Dec. 16th, 2007 07:10 am (UTC)
i am SO going to spam your inbox with smooches for this. god. guh! spazz. thank you. ♥♥♥♥
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