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Title: Tarnished Angels
Pairing: Min/Other

Section Rating: PG-13
Overall Rating: NC-17
Blame: ranalore

Summary: Hot Korean boys. A seduction. An alluring. A temptation. And Min's self-discovery.

Sections: One,

Related Fics: So Much Mine and Lavender Bunny. Links go to PDFs. Other related fics can be found at my LJ: wedspawn



The hard wooden floor felt deliciously cool against Min’s overheated body. Closing his eyes, he lay and let the ache work up from his feet to his shoulders, mentally releasing the pain through his upturned palms. Another deep breath was nearly enough to take out the first wave quivering through his body. The third breathe, deep into his chest and held until it burst through his belly, equalized the pressure he felt pushing in from the outside.

“Here.” Yunho’s voice slid through the fractures of Changmin’s calm, an icy touch of wet on his bare shoulder. Cracking open one eyelid, Min couldn’t help but grin at the offer of a chilled bottle of electrolyte water. It was a struggle to sit up but Min allowed himself to be lured into it by the cold drink, Yunho setting himself down beside the youngest of the group.

The others continued to work through their routine, a complicated weaving dance step that seemed nearly impossible for Jaejoong to grasp. A slender female choreographer led the elder singer through the dance, sliding in behind him to guide along, a slow light to draw a fluttering moth.

“I think he’s almost got it.” Min used his chin to indicate Jae, twisting the cap of his drink open. “Now Yoochun is tangled in with Junsu.”

“I don’t think that’s an accident.” Yunho’s deep voice rumbled with a flat humour. “Yoochun’s hands aren’t where they should be.”

Changmin spotted Chunnie’s fingers grazing the small of Junsu’s back, lifting up the edge of the other’s shirt as he moved by. Junsu pursed his mouth in frustration at the touch, pulled out of his concentration by his lover’s caress but fighting to contain a smile from the pleasure it gave him. The dance instructor on the other side of Jaejoong saw none of it, her attention fixed on the lanky singer.

“His hands are probably where Junsu really wants them.” Min said slyly, taking a sip of his water.

Yunho glanced at the young man under hooded eyes. Changmin had grown up while Yunho wasn’t looking, stretching upward in body and outward in his mind. Taking a sip at his own drink, Yunho merely murmured a soft indistinct reply.

“Hyung, you’re fairly… wise about things like love. Or at least where to put… the parts of your body that want love.” Min’s off-handed comment made the water spurt from Yunho’s mouth and up through his nostrils.

“Ah! Min!” Yunho wrinkled the bridge of his nose, scrubbing at his dripping nostrils with the flat of his palm. “Warn me when you’re about to say something stupid so I can prepare myself.”

“You don’t think you’re…” Min searched for the proper word. “Experienced? I would have thought that with everything that Jaejoong has put you through over the past few years, you would be the perfect person to ask about a few things.”

“If you want to know how to drive Jaejoong crazy,” Yunho cocked his head, a quirk of his lip giving his smile a jaunty sneer. “Then I can talk to you about that. But if you were to try any of that, then we’d be looking for another high vocalist. Either that or you’ll be singing higher than you ever thought possible.”

“No, no.” Min made a face. “Jaejoong is too complicated. I sometimes think he has two separate personalities that live inside of his body and they switch just to tease us. I just wanted to ask you about…”

“Come on, let’s take this outside.” Yunho stood, dragging the youngest up with him. “I’d pay more attention to you there. And it sounds as if you need my full attention.”

Horns blathered through the streets, cabs whipping past the two young men as they stepped out to sit under the wide awning outside of the dance studio, a flight of cement stairs wrapping up around the building to the empty back offices. A fried oyster kiosk did a brisk business on the corner, the tantalizing aroma of ponzu sauce and seafood calling to Yunho’s hunger.

“I should have brought money with me.” Yunho groaned aloud. “The smell of food is going to drive me crazy. Talk to me, dongsaeng. Who’s got you thinking about love?”

“Not love.” Changmin corrected with a shake of his head. His dark eyes were watchful, absorbing the motion of the traffic winding slowly past. He saw nearly every face, studying the varied expressions and wondered briefly at the lives walking by. These people had lovers and longings. Some wore their worries openly on their faces, others shuttered any shred of personality behind a hardened shell.

“More… lust.” Min listened with satisfaction at Yunho’s intake of breath. He enjoyed throwing the older man off his stride. “Love. I see the four of you every day. Love isn’t something I need to talk about.”

“You’re…”

“Too young to think about lust?”

“No, not that.” Yunho shook his head. “Lust is something for frivolous people. You are never that, Minnie-ah.”

“Of all the worldly passions, lust is the most intense. All other worldly passions seem to follow in its train.”* Min quoted at the leader. “Passion of any kind is just a fractured reflection of lust. Even a solemn person can be shallow.”

“Min, that you can come up with a quote for lust shows me that you’re not frivolous.” Yunho leaned back on his hands, the gritty sand of the poured cement biting into his palms. “Were you thinking of anything specific or were you just asking about it in general?”

“In general.” Min contemplated. “What makes a man lust?”

“God, that’s like asking why we think.” Yunho responded. “Are you sure you’re human? You’re telling me that you’ve never lusted for something before?”

“Not something. Someone.” Min explained. “And why would someone lust for someone else? I want to think that it is something chemical that in invoked if there are certain triggers or scents but there’s something inside of me that believes it goes deeper than that.”

“I think lust is harder than love.” Yunho nodded at Min’s mocking snort. “No, it is. Lust is hard to maintain. It fades so quickly. Ah, I’m not good at explaining this.”

“Explaining what, Yunnie-ah?” Jaejoong mounted the stairs towards where the pair sat, drops of rain washing some of the sweat from his face. He carefully sat down between Yunho’s feet, leaning against the other man, using Yunho’s legs as a back rest. To a casual observer the touch would appear casual but the swell of black in Yunho’s pupils said something else.

“Dongsaeng asked about the difference between lust and love.”

“Not the difference, hyung. The why of lust.” Min corrected. Leaning forward, he brought his face down closer to Jae. “I don’t think Yunho knows a lot about lust.”

“He knows …” Jae’s face coloured as Yunho’s foot nudged the rise of his rear. “Let’s leave Yunho out of this.”

“Lust.” Jaejoong mused, leaning his head back against Yunho’s knees, his tousle of black hair spreading over the other’s bended legs. “Lust is when you see someone and say, I want to taste him in my mouth.”

Changmin swallowed at the inference, Seven’s words echoing Jae’s sentiment.

He’d not heard from the older singer in days and wondered if the pursuit was over before it had ever truly began.
Then a text message on his phone greeted him during breakfast. A murmur of needing to find someplace warm to put cold fingers. Min remained at the table long after he’d eaten, unwilling to be seen with the press of his body against the thin fabric of his night shorts.

“Yunho, go help the other two.” Jae leaned forward, reaching back to tug at his lover’s shin.

“If you want to talk to Min privately, you can just say that.” Yunho mumbled against the back of Jae’s head.

“Go. I want to talk to Min alone.”

“I’ll tell them to hurry and learn what they need to so we can go home and get some food.” Yunho groaned as he stood up, stretching out his legs. “Don’t be too long.”

Jaejoong waited until his lover passed around the corner, sliding up to the step where Changmin sat. Pursing his lips, he contemplated the younger man with an assessing look.

“Don’t look at me like that, hyung.” Min protested. “I just was curious.”

“You’re never just curious, Minnie-ah.” Jae commented. “There is always a reason for your curiosity.”

“Sometimes, my reasons should remain private.”

“They could but they won’t.” The other reminded Min. “We’re too tightly woven for anything to remain private for long.”

“I might want it to be private.” Changmin replied.

Everything he did was definitely out in the open. He woke up to find others breathing in his space and went to sleep with the press of others’ thoughts in his head. Not for the first time, he wondered if he couldn’t just rent a small closet somewhere for a few hours each day just for the quiet of his own thoughts.

“And this is about lust?”

“It’s about a lot of things.” Min agreed. “Mostly, it’s about my wanting to try out… tastes. I think I’m old enough. I’m no longer a wide-eyed child that everyone needs to protect.”

“You were never that child, dongsaeng.” Jae said softly.

That was the last thing Changmin wanted; to be perceived as a child. He fought that every day. Every single moment of every day. Until he joined the group, he’d been the eldest. He knew that role. Embraced it. Now he was the youngest and it fit poorly on his shoulders.

As the group evolved and each of them settled comfortably into their routine, Min quickly discovered he lost the identity that had been constructed for him. He was supposed to be the cute one. The innocent. Once more, not a comfortable fit. He hated pretending that he sat in a field of sugar daisies and dreamed of pink unicorns.

Changmin wanted to dream of sloe-eyed men with dangerous smiles. And wicked mouths promising long nights of heat and satiation. Min wanted to be the man that would draw that. But how to go about being that person was something that eluded him.

“There is someone that…” Min puffed out his cheeks and blew the air from his lungs, cleansing his body. “He calls and sometimes we talk about things that leave me feeling like my skin is on too tight. As if when I go to move, I would split open and all of my guts would spill out of my body.”

“I don’t want forever with him.” Changmin whispered. “I don’t think he’s someone that thinks about next week much less about love and eternity. I know this. I don’t want that either. It’s too soon in my life to find the person that I want to die next to.”

“It’s never too soon for that.” Jae commented darkly. “You have the right to be as miserable as I am sometimes.”

“Love just seems like a waste of energy.” Min laughed. “I watch the four of you and you spend so much of your lives hiding who you love and how you care. And then on top of trying to fit yourself into a relationship that none of you really know how it works, you have to learn how to maneuver your body into pleasing the other person.”

“I don’t want to learn how to make love at the same time I’m learning to love.” The youngest explained. “I want to experience the sensations of my body without having to worry about my heart.”

“Do you want to know what I think?” Jaejoong asked softly.

“Yes. I always care about what you have to say, hyung.”

“I think you believe that love is a burden and not one that you want to carry.” Jae’s bright eyes shone in the soft watery daylight coming down through the rain. “I understand that. I do. But I think you will be missing so much if you don’t love as you explore inside of yourself for the answers that you’re looking for.”

“Everything changes when you love the person you’re with, dongsaeng.” Jae said, resting his hand lightly on Min’s arm.

“I’m not saying that I won’t love.” Min replied. “I just don’t want to love right now.”

“Okay.” The eldest licked at his lower lip, a sure sign he was thinking. “What happens if you fall in love with this person that you lust for? Does he…wait, is it really a he?”

“Yes.” Min nodded. “He’s someone that I know. And I am not going to fall in love with him”

“Does this mysterious he lust after you?”

“Yes, he’s told me so.” Changmin afforded himself a small sigh, thinking of the dark crawl of want in Seven’s voice the last time they spoke.

“And you are sure that he won’t fall in love with you?”

“I’m not someone that has others fall in love with him.” Changmin let out a yelp of protest when Jaejoong struck his leg with a clenched fist. “Ow! I’m being truthful. I don’t have the charisma to pull anyone in. And I don’t want that anyway. Not now.”

“Plenty of people would fall in love with you if they just saw you, Minnie-ah.” Jaejoong admitted. “Don’t say things like that.”

“You defend me because you love me.” The youngest quickly swiveled his hips, taking his leg out of reach of Jae’s hand. “I just want to… explore, Joongie-ah. I want to see what’s inside of me. To understand why someone drives me insane until I can’t think and then someone else just leaves me feeling as if we are good friends. I want to know what it’s like to lose myself in pleasure.”

“Promise me that you’ll take care of your heart, Minnie-ah.” Jaejoong whispered. “Please.”

“I will.” Min poked at the other’s cheek with his finger, dimpling Jae’s porcelain skin.

Jae moved to hug the youngest, his arms nearly embracing Changmin when the young man’s phone burst into song from its place in Min’s pocket. Grinning, Jae gave Min the barest of kisses on his forehead before loping down the stairs, ostensibly giving Changmin the privacy he needed and deserved.

“Minku.” The voice as velvet again, hot silky midnight despite the cold of the rain. “Are you busy?”

“I…uh.” Min stopped talking when Yoochun popped his head around the corner and stared up the steps. The baritone’s predictable nature meant Yoochun would more than likely climb the steps to harass Changmin as he spoke.

“You have company.” Dong-wook sounded displeased to Min’s untrained ear.

“Chunnie-ah.” Changmin waved the other member off, pointing to the phone and asking for five minutes with a wave of his hand. “We’ve just finished rehearsal.”

“I’m just going in to mine.” Seven said, the sounds of people working loud echoing through the phone lines. “I thought I would give you a call. Something to make me hard. It helps me dance better.”

Blushing, Min dropped his face down, not wanting the now overly curious Yoochun to see his red face. “Yunho was right. He said lust was for frivolous people.”

“Are you saying I’m frivolous?” Seven asked, playfully mocking in false outrage. “I’m very serious. I take lust very seriously. How else can your lover enjoy it?”

“I’m…not your lover.” Min corrected the other, keeping his voice down to a soft murmur. “I have to go. The others will come looking for me.”

“I’m not your lover yet, pretty.” Seven said. “I’ll call you when I’m done with dinner. I have to go to a thing. Are you going to be up?”

“Yes.” Min squeezed his eyes shut, remonstrating himself for agreeing to quickly. “Maybe. I’m tired. It’s beena long day.”

Someone shouted for Seven, loud and close enough for Changmin to hear. “I have to go as well, Minku but I want you to remember something for when we talk again.”

“What’s that?” Min swallowed. The last instance Seven told him to remember something, it kept him up nearly half the night with the possibilities of where the older man would leave his first love bite.

“I want you to remember that yet I said because I am going to become your lover.” Seven’s chuckle held a ripe promise in its fullness. “And that the next time I see you, I’m going to spend a lot of my time and energy making you scream my name.”

“So Minku, do me a favour and repeat after me, man’etsu.”

“Man’etsu.” Changmin rolled the word over his tongue. “What does that mean?”

“It’s what I’m going to bring you to once you finally give up running away from me.” Seven promised. “And I’m going to enjoy bringing you there. I will talk to you later, little Minku. Wait up for me. The last thing I want to hear tonight before I go to bed is you panting into the phone.”



*Quote: Buddha Gotama

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snowpiggie
Jun. 1st, 2007 11:10 pm (UTC)
YAY!! Me go lock office's door to read XD.
wedspawn
Jun. 1st, 2007 11:19 pm (UTC)
ah, it's not that smutty! ♥♥♥♥ snookies
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ladybug2199
Jun. 2nd, 2007 12:36 am (UTC)
brb to comment...I'm being pulled in too many directions to read properly.
wedspawn
Jun. 2nd, 2007 06:11 am (UTC)
oh, smooches and snookies :) ♥♥♥♥♥
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jl2668
Jun. 2nd, 2007 01:07 am (UTC)
min has really deep thoughts...
how does he manage to keep those thoughts plus practice and all the concert stuff in organized form?

that conversation between yunho and changmin and then between jaejoong and minnie....was really well thought out..
i think i've come to understand, or at least know the roles that you've set out for the boys in this smm universe...and it fits that perfectly...

so now the big question remains...will seven really only just lust after minnie...or will it turn into something more..hmmm..i wish for a happy ending..xD

<3
jl2668
Jun. 2nd, 2007 01:08 am (UTC)
hahhaa...i just realized this..
i'm third..!

yay...

=D...and i really like your icon for this fic..that icon fits really well with the title...^^
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faricsyung
Jun. 2nd, 2007 01:30 am (UTC)
Min is really something. The YunJaeMin convo seemed natural and smooth. I like how Jae came to Yunho's rescue.. and I ached a bit when Jae advised Min to take care of his heart. <3

Subtle YooSu. <3

Liking the explorations so far.. I see TA shares a dark atmosphere as SMM. Hoping to see some light peeking in, but I guess it'd be too abrupt. xD

Thank you for this! ^^ <3
wedspawn
Jun. 2nd, 2007 06:29 am (UTC)
♥♥♥ it's a bit more dangerous than SMM. i don't know where min and seven are going. i always knew there was going to be a jaeho. and a yoosu but min? i have no idea :)

♥♥♥♥ thank you for reading this. it means so so much. we'll have to see where it goes :) snookies!
already
Jun. 2nd, 2007 01:55 am (UTC)
MEEE. MY SPOT!!
wedspawn
Jun. 2nd, 2007 06:30 am (UTC)
you! you! ::::hugs and chus::: offers cookies :) ♥♥♥♥
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herokun
Jun. 2nd, 2007 02:00 am (UTC)
*saves spot*

BRB to read! (^o^)//
wedspawn
Jun. 2nd, 2007 06:32 am (UTC)
♥♥♥:::: saves spot on couch:::::
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wedspawn
Jun. 2nd, 2007 06:47 am (UTC)
ah min, we'll have to see what happens to him. :::Grins::: and yes, his heart is a fragile thing. hopefully, he'll treat it well. but se7en is a brat. :)

♥♥♥ snookies and chus. thank you for reading my stuff!
xiao_tian_jelly
Jun. 2nd, 2007 11:50 am (UTC)
“Lust is when you see someone and say, I want to taste him in my mouth.”

*CHOKESONCOOKIES*

The last thing I want to hear tonight before I go to bed is you panting into the phone.”

*GASPS*

SORRY MY KEYBOARD WAS CAPSLOCK-LOCKED JUST LIKE MY MIND IS WITH THIS FIC.

*DANCESAROUNDCRAZILY*

*WONTGOBACKTOHIDINGANYMORE&WILLJUSTWAITFORTHENEXTCHAPPIE*
wedspawn
Jun. 2nd, 2007 05:43 pm (UTC)
:::Plumps pillows on the couch::: this is much more comfortable ♥♥♥♥

ah, i am glad you liked it! :::grins:: it will be interesting to see what i can do today. because i have no clue :) but :::grins::: we'll see :)

::::hugs::: and dont hurt yourself dancing. have some cocoa :) ([_]
wmelon_kaiye
Jun. 2nd, 2007 02:12 pm (UTC)
>.<

(dies)
(goes to bed now)

Oh god, I don't even want to know what kind of dreams I'm going to have...
and to make it WORSE..my MEDIA PLAYER STRUCK AGAIN
LOL

It was playing "TONIGHT" >.<
when I read the last few sentences...at the point where the lyrics go "I loved you when I saw you, wanna touch you, wanna feel you" D=<

Oh dear... (showers you with cream puffs)
(runs) ^^

wedspawn
Jun. 2nd, 2007 06:04 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥ ::::grins:::: thank you. i hope you have nice dreams :) ::::grins::: ♥♥♥♥

snookies. and that's a great song for that part of the fic.

and i'm glad you liked it! :::hugs:::
cluvy
Jun. 2nd, 2007 03:14 pm (UTC)
oh gdness. this is so hot. I really like how you use jae and yunho to counsel minnie. and the way you portray how min feels. it's interesting. and quite fresh. I like it.

LUST... ♥

Getting to read this almost everyday makes me really happy. Hope the writing is going okay =)
wedspawn
Jun. 2nd, 2007 06:07 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥ the writing is going okay. this is a hard fic to write. nothing really to fall back on. very new territory. :D but seven is fun :)

i'm hoping min and seven will help me bring this fic to life :) and yeah, it's a bit spiced with lust.

snookies and chus! ♥ thank you for reading. muchly thanks!
badbadz
Jun. 2nd, 2007 04:34 pm (UTC)
whoa.. that was a fast update. i just finished section one last night, haven't even had time to reply to that -__-... and then section 2 comes along <3 XD i've been waiting for this fic.. though i loooovvveee jaeho and yoosu, my heart goes out to baby min. >__< *sniff* he's got a complicated way of thinking.. too deep for his age. but i love it. can't wait for the next section <3 ah, se7en... it'd be so interesting to read about se7en "tainting" our innocent min... or maybe he's not so innocent anymore. ^^ <33
wedspawn
Jun. 2nd, 2007 06:11 pm (UTC)
ah, i am so happy you liked it! ♥♥♥ min is going to be a special project because there is no guidance for how he feels about seven nor is there a pairing parameter that i can follow like jaeho and yoosu. very interesting to write.

ah, min's innocence is what he hates. he's just been the baby and he's sick of it :)

and there's seven, willing and ready to help him :) ♥♥♥

snookies and thank you!
mickey8
Jun. 3rd, 2007 06:25 am (UTC)
i'm not sure what is exactly good for Minnie.. where does he wants to go or where is this going? his reasoning for the exploration is solid but at the same time.. it seems so ridiculous. *shrugs*

lust or love ... it's tough.

and i love the idea of YunJae here... one taking up the other's place so naturally.. Jae's always the best to go to in this kind of situation i suppose ^^

and i'm slow *gets shot*

~♥~
wedspawn
Jun. 3rd, 2007 06:33 am (UTC)
min is not sure where he wants to go or where this is going. he's not stopped to think about it. and lust or love... it does seem tough.

trust me. :) that's all i ask. trust me :) have i ever let you down before? :::flutters eyelashes:::

unless of course it's too ridiculous. :::grins:::

you are not slow. not everyone will like this story. promise. it's okay if you don't. ♥♥♥

i'm hoping to have min and se7en come to terms with what they are doing and what they want :) we'll have to see :::grins and hugs::: ♥♥♥ snookies.
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uknowiloveyou
Jun. 3rd, 2007 02:46 pm (UTC)
Spot! *grumbles that she sees this late*
uknowiloveyou
Jun. 3rd, 2007 04:32 pm (UTC)
OMG. This is just wonderful. Okay, I'm not going to comment like a little kid anymore. I'm 16 for crying out loud. Well, I learned a lot as I read, and I love that. Somehow, I feel that yoiu have a grasp of the whole world around you. I love how you made the YunJaeMin conversation so flawless, as if this were really happening (as I like to believe it does). You're fics open my eyes to so much. Similarly, it makes me want to comtinue my own fics. Yet another job well done! XD
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tea_biscuit
Jun. 4th, 2007 02:02 am (UTC)
I'm breathless right now. This fic has such a sweet, slow pace. I loves it. Aigoo...You know what I think already, I'm sure *fluffles the unni* I'm too drawn for poetics right now. I'll leave you something pretty tomorrw, perhaps, ne? Ciao, bella. I'll see you in the next section. Aiiiish *shakes head* I cannot believe I forgot about this journal of yours. Aiiiish again. I'm so behind on this fic. Here I go. Time to gurgle and twitch in delight at this fic. Min is perfect. Keep up the good work. All this exploring is doing you a whole lot of good, baby <3 Chu~~
wedspawn
Jun. 4th, 2007 02:06 am (UTC)
:::grins::: smooches and snookies. min is a lot of fun to write. really. he is. so much fun! :)

this is a good pace. but we'll probably be kicking it up in a bit :) i just tossed down the towel for min to pick up :)

snookies and hugs. ♥♥♥♥♥ chus.
annaleinchen
Jun. 4th, 2007 02:02 am (UTC)
♥~
Love again. *O*
thx so much. ^^
wedspawn
Jun. 4th, 2007 02:08 am (UTC)
♥♥♥♥ smooches and snookies ♥♥♥♥

i'm glad you liked it! ♥
lil_tvxqcamper
Jun. 6th, 2007 01:50 pm (UTC)
Hilarious how Yunho chocked on his water, he didn't expect that, right? Well, that was kinda sudden, but yeah, I wasn't expecting that he would ask Yunho in that matter, well you never now, but in my opinion Jae would definitely be the right one keke^^
But I love that brotherly affection between them, Jaemin love...
Se7en is really so sure of himself, I wonder how's that...
But I really love how the story is going, can't wait, can't wait keke^^
wedspawn
Jun. 6th, 2007 02:46 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥ se7en is so so sure of himself. very cocky. i wanted to show the jaemin that is there. jae really is an older brother for the first time and min is a younger for the first time. it is a different dynamic for both of them. :) ♥♥♥

smooches again!
arisu_22
Jun. 10th, 2007 10:03 pm (UTC)
AHA >_< Yunho cracks me up
“Lust is when you see someone and say, I want to taste him in my mouth.” Jae....<3333 >.<
wedspawn
Jun. 11th, 2007 02:12 am (UTC)
::grins::: i'm glad you liked it! ♥♥♥ and yeah, yunnie is always good for a grin ^__^ ♥
audient
Jul. 1st, 2007 04:20 pm (UTC)
“Ah! Min!” Yunho wrinkled the bridge of his nose, scrubbing at his dripping nostrils with the flat of his palm. “Warn me when you’re about to say something stupid so I can prepare myself.”

I love YunHo ♥ (yes, I'm going to leave a comment--short or long or coherent or not--in every chapter, meaning you're probably gonna get 31 comments in your inbox... if I don't pass out first, it's 11PM here.

I'm sorry :|

I WANT TO PRETEND I DIDN'T MISS THE FIRST THIRTY SECTIONS OKAY ;___; )

Actually, I loved the whole section. It speaks a lot of Min's character, his relationship with YunHo, YunHo's relationship with JaeJoong, and JaeJoong's character altogether. The conversation flowed really nicely and just ♥

...And then there's se7en. sjdhslakjdhlkfsjhdfksjhlakjthek wtf. He's just so. . . . I wanna say vulgar but that's not quite. He says things that will make me blush if I hear it. MUCH LESS ON THE PHONE. :|

... *goes to section 3*
wedspawn
Jul. 1st, 2007 05:49 pm (UTC)
sweetie. comment away. it's okay. i'll respond to you.

i love yunho too. ::::hugs::: isn't he fun? i wanted to show their relationships. and yes, se7en...ah se7en. he does say things that would make someone blush. he makes min blush. ::::grins:::

much love. ♥
patra86
Mar. 9th, 2008 12:36 pm (UTC)
“Hyung, you’re fairly… wise about things like love. Or at least where to put… the parts of your body that want love.” Min’s off-handed comment made the water spurt from Yunho’s mouth and up through his nostrils.

“Ah! Min!” Yunho wrinkled the bridge of his nose, scrubbing at his dripping nostrils with the flat of his palm. “Warn me when you’re about to say something stupid so I can prepare myself.”


priceless. It makes me laugh every freaking time.

And this chapter was deep. Well with Minku, the convos are always meaningful and deep. The difference about love and lust and all that. I luuuuuuuuve it. Ok off to chapter 3. I think I won't stop until I reach the limo scene *evil grin*
wedspawn
Mar. 9th, 2008 04:42 pm (UTC)
:::grins::: min is very wise. and yes, a bit snarky but oh so much love. :::winks::: snookies.
aniprincess_13
Oct. 17th, 2009 08:13 am (UTC)
Seven is driving me crazy... and I'm not the who he's talking to... and damn it I barely know the guy... fuck o.o
wedspawn
Oct. 17th, 2009 03:03 pm (UTC)
ah, then i have done my job well. se7en is of the smexy in this. :::Grins::: heh.
c0urtney6776
Oct. 17th, 2009 06:35 pm (UTC)
The last sentence was so... full of smex.
xDD
wedspawn
Oct. 17th, 2009 06:37 pm (UTC)
heh... well yes.. this is a very... sexually sensual fic :::winks:::
jingeng
Oct. 19th, 2009 12:27 am (UTC)
I have never had any interest in Se7en, but he is even making me crazy now, yet alone Minnie ^^
This book is pretty hot =)
Not saying the others weren't, it's just that I have a feeling like this one gets hotter then the previous ones. Dunno.. Anyway ^^I'm loving all the way ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
wedspawn
Oct. 19th, 2009 01:51 am (UTC)
oh this one is... yeah... um.. much more... sexual than the others but as to getting lemony, it takes a while. the seduction factor is MUCH higher :::grins::: ♥ let me know when you... well, you'll see.
k_chan91
Oct. 20th, 2009 05:26 am (UTC)
Mwhahaa. I want to explore this Se7en person you have making Minnie all hot and bothered from the the very beginning this time. >D Hopefully I'll be more timely. ._.

And I really, really, really, really, really want to squish Min! :D

*gives you cookies*
wedspawn
Oct. 20th, 2009 01:15 pm (UTC)
heh..... ah, thank you. se7en is... yeah, he's fun in this. really he is. :::nods::: so much fun. and min is squishable! oooo cookies! :::shares cocoa::::
jingeng
Nov. 25th, 2009 04:22 pm (UTC)
“I’m just going in to mine.” Seven said, the sounds of people working loud echoing through the phone lines. “I thought I would give you a call. Something to make me hard. It helps me dance better.”

love it!

and no, you aren't having a deja vu xDD
I'm reading this book again ^^

Sometimes things get reaaaally boring and totally not irrelevant while on uni so I copied this book to word doc cause I have a word reader on my cell XDD
So yeah, I started reading this all over again ^^ and I'm loving it ♥♥♥

wedspawn
Nov. 25th, 2009 06:17 pm (UTC)
i was all...... wait.... didn't you already read this? OMO o_O ♥♥♥♥heh.
(no subject) - jingeng - Nov. 25th, 2009 06:25 pm (UTC) - Expand
changminlv
Aug. 8th, 2010 07:43 pm (UTC)
^^
seriously, my heart's beating so hard, when i read every single word of this fic.i feel so excited right now. i will use all day to day to read this fanfic, and comment as well ^^
XD min7en is so lust.
and lol first time i think about wat diff b/t lust and love. >3<
wedspawn
Aug. 8th, 2010 08:13 pm (UTC)
Re: ^^
::::Grins::: right now, they are such lust. aaaahhhhh.... and min is going to explore it :::grins more::: smooches.
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