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Title: On The Red Couch
Pairing: YunJae (with some YooSu and Min7en)
Chapter: Nine
Chapter Rating: R
Genre: Slash/Relationship
Author: wedspawn

Part One: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, Se7en, 8, 9, 10, 11

Part Two: 12, 13 (Extremely Mature Content), 14, 15, 16, Comments Regarding Storyline , Se7enteen, 18, 19, 20, 21 (Lemon)

Part Three: 22, 23, 24, 25, 26, Twenty-Se7en (LEMON), 28, 29, 30, 31, 32 (LEMON), 33, 34, 35, 36, Thirty-Se7en, 38, 39, 40 (Final)


Summary: Hot Korean boys. Sex. Dancing and some angry words. Not necessarily in that order. Not necessarily in each section. Final Book in SMM series.



Men were in the shadows, circling around the floor where colourful lights played over sweaty, pretty boys. The dance floor stretched over most of the lower area, spilling up into low platforms rising up a few feet. The more exhibitionist minded dancers lingered there, their supple bodies dripping with come-hither movements and flashing eyes. The once-lovers avoided the spotlights and platforms, keeping themselves to the corner and hugging to the darkness. Music pounded their bodies, the beat of the speakers creating a soft wind to ruffle their hair and clothes.

A few inches separated them but to Yunho, it might as well have been several miles.

Jae’s head was down, his hair fallen forward to veil his cheekbones but Yunho knew the expression the other man’s face — a lost sensual angel mask he wore when he fell into the music playing around him. There were times when only Jaejoong could hear the melody in his mind, enraptured by the sounds blending around him but now in the flood of sensation, lights and sound, Yunho shared the singer’s ethereal experience and wanted more.

Two weeks then another two passed since he’d visited Netsuke and he’d heard not even a whisper of a call on his cell phone. Every few days he fought the urge to call his father and complain but Jae’s haunted eyes when Kimura walked through their apartment kept him silent. He had to focus on keeping Jaejoong safe and away from the cruelties their manager would visit upon him. Yunho had his job to do and he needed to keep that in mind.

Knowing that didn’t make the wait any easier. And seeing Kimura’s smirking sneer when his eyes fell on Jae’s slender body made Yunho’s fists itch. A splash of blood on his knuckles, the leader growled to himself. That’s all Yunho wanted. And to see Kimura bleeding out and as bruised as Jaejoong’s heart had been.

The light caught on Jaejoong’s shoulders and Yunho suddenly found himself staring into the young man’s face, his amber whiskey eyes were dark with pleasure and his full mouth wore the imprints of Jae’s teeth, his tongue dabbing at the spots where he’d chewed on his lip while dancing. The dart of tongue made Yunho hard and despite years of watching Jaejoong taste at the air or his mouth, the leader couldn’t help but react to the sight of his sensual mouth partially open and panting, begging to be filled.

Unable to do something about the stiffness in his body, Yunho pulled Jaejoong closer, guiding the young man into the curve of his body until they fit against one another. They moved easily, Jaejoong’s back against Yunho’s chest. Dark ink played peek-a-boo with Yunho around Jae’s t-shirt collar, the top of their group’s name sliding in and out of view. Daringly, the man leaned forward, smiling as Jae dropped his head back to rest on his shoulder.

Keeping his eyes on the crowd, Yunho waited until the lights dipped away from them and let his tongue wander, tasting at the tattoo Jaejoong wore so proudly on his back.

The singer stiffened, either from shock or his body reacting to Yunho’s wet caress but then a moment later, Jaejoong relaxed, draping back against the other’s open arms. With his head bent back, his throat exposed and his mouth open, Jaejoong lay surrendered to Yunho’s touch and mouth, his hips moving against the other man’s hips in time with the slow groove settling over them.

Li hing mui, Yunho thought, that’s what Jaejoong tastes like when dancing. They’d tried the odd preserved plum a month or so ago and the delicate but strong flavour fused to Yunho’s mind. He’d struggled to remember where he’d tasted it before, if only to satisfy his own curiosity and with the lithe bodied singer undulating against him and a lick of Jae’s body on his tongue, Yunho finally got his answer. Traveling plum was what the name translated to and Yunho couldn’t think of anything better to describe his estranged boyfriend.

A succulent plum pulled dry from a hard life but then rolled in sugar, salt and a spicy licorice, the flavours had battled for dominance in Yunho’s mouth as Jae’s tang now confused his mind. A hint of black sweet lingered as an aftertaste, either from a dash of cologne or more likely from the complex scent of the singer’s favoured soap.

Yunho resisted another taste. A man’s eyes were on them, piercing and dark as if he could peel back their clothes and watch the couple’s most intimate moves. Apprehensive curls started in Yunho’s stomach, creeping and winding through his nerves until he felt himself begin to move away from Jaejoong, his emotions shuttered back by the damning thoughts of his own upbringing.

“Look at those men,” His uncle once said as they passed two older men holding hands in the park. “It’s disgusting what they do.

Yunho had only seen two men holding hands, their shoulders brushing and laughter in their voices but the dripping hatred in his relative’s voice was evident. Their actions were abhorrent, damaging to society and a perversion. A Korean man could casually touch a friend but couldn’t linger. To hold onto another man for longer than a moment meant a deviance no one would abide for.

And yet as the group slowly drew together, Yunho found himself holding onto Dong Bang Shin Ki’s slender vocalist for longer and longer moments. Then Yunho found himself unwilling to let go.

The distance between his and Jaejoong had grown. If he tried, Yunho could put his fist between their bodies and the space hurt. Jae danced on, not feeling or not caring about the span of air lingering hot between them but Yunho felt it, long threads snapping as he moved and shifted.

Every thread was a memory, shared and remembered, hooking into Yunho’s soul. They tugged, sometimes leaving starbursts of pain while others were warm points spreading through him but the connection was there, drawing Jae to him. Reaching out, Yunho placed his hands on Jaejoong’s belly, wrapping his arms around his lithe boyfriend. Raising his head, the leader met the man’s eyes, challenging him to speak up against their touching… to say anything about Yunho’s running his palms over Jae’s chest, circling around the pebbled nubs now visible through the singer’s thin t-shirt.

He wanted to bend Jae’s head back, holding the other’s hair in his clenched fist until the singer was arched against him. With his throat exposed and hips canted out, Yunho could spend his time exploring the sensitive skin below Jae’s earlobe, nuzzling and nipping as the young singer moaned his little kittenish mews. In the darkness, Yunho was tempted to pull the shirt free of Jae’s body or even, more daringly, tear it down the front so the young man’s chest was exposed and he could reach in to explore Jae’s long torso or wet his fingers and play with the diamond embellished gold ring piercing Jae’s navel.

As if hearing Yunho’s thoughts, Jae slithered back, his hips rolling into with an erotic allure. Too ethereal-minded to recall the intricate steps of their choreography without excess repetitions, Jaejoong’s graceful sensuality emerged only in the driving pound of a freeform dance, his supple and seemingly boneless body wrapped around the music in ways that bent Yunho’s imagination.

The music shifted, changing over to a faster beat and Jae followed, led by the bass. Continuing to watch, the man’s eyes glazed over, his thoughts moving to places and things other than what was in front of him. With a lift of his lip, Yunho dismissed him, turning his attention to the pale column of Jae’s throat.

A pulse fluttered blue under Jae’s skin, the singer’s collarbone dewed with small dots of sweat. With the lights flashing in time to the music, the drops sparkled on the singer’s skin, jewels on white velvet. Unable to resist the temptation, Yunho licked the ridge clean, running his tongue over the length of Jae’s chest to savour the licorice scented flesh under his lips.

Buzzing interrupted Yunho’s playful fondling of Jae’s body and he frowned, debating if he should leave his phone in his pocket but the vibrations stilled only for a second before starting up again. First one incoming text then another, rapidly following one another drew Yunho away but not before he sank his teeth into Jae’s throat, pulling up a mouthful of the singer’s skin between his teeth. He would leave a mark, Yunho thought as he rolled the mouthful back and forth. He would leave it and be proud of Jaejoong wearing the imprint of his biting kiss when they tumbled out of the club and into the night.

Jaejoong glanced back when Yunho pulled away. Holding up his lit up phone, Yunho wrinkled his nose and held up his fingers, asking Jae to wait for him. Nodding, the singer closed his eyes and started dancing, shifting away from the crowd as he lifted his arms over his shoulders and bent his head, rolling his shoulders in time to the music.

Keeping one eye on his lover, Yunho checked his messages with a quick flick of his fingers. He didn’t care for the glances Jae was gathering from the dancers on the main floor and from the interested quirk of one young man’s eyebrow, Yunho was fairly certain he’d have to either back Jaejoong up when he said no or end up punching out another club-goer.

Have something for you. Want to give to K yourself or want me to? Netsuke used a simple form of Japanese but the intent was clear. She wanted him to respond quickly and he’d ignored her, or so he imagined considering she’d left four messages with basically the same message. Come by and get package. Or I’ll go. Let me know.

I will come get. Yunho struggled with the words. Sighing at his lingual skills, he checked the time and sighed again. Part of him hated cutting his time with Jaejoong short, especially since the singer often felt amorous following a night out but Netsuke was clear. She was short on time and doing Yunho a favour. He’d have to dance attendance to her when she wanted him to.

“Baby,” Yunho shouted into Jae’s ear. “Gotta go”

Jaejoong frowned, grabbing Yunho’s wrist to check his watch. It was early, his face clearly said but when Yunho shouted their manager’s name so he could hear, the singer went pale and nodded. Holding Jaejoong’s hand, Yunho brushed past the man who’d been staring, jostling his shoulder as they went by. Regardless if he shared Jaejoong’s bed, Yunho would make it clear the young man was leaving with him.

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The alleyway was even darker than Yunho remembered and rats scattered in all directions when he walked past the garbage bin. Having dropped Jaejoong off at the apartment, Yunho made certain the others were there before he left. Unwilling to leave Jae and Min with Kimura, the leader woke Yoochun up with a violent shake, pulling him out of bed as Jae mumbled about needing a shower.

Kimura lingered in the kitchen, watching with narrowed eyes as the baritone stumbled out of the hallway. He’d long caught on to the members’ unwillingness to leave Jae with him but they’d been circumspect before. In dragging Yoochun out, Yunho was flagrantly throwing down the gauntlet for Kimura to pick up.

“You can’t be here all the time, shonen,” Kimura said, sipping at hot cup of tea. His eyes lingered on Jae’s chest before moving on to the length of his legs, tiny spots of skin showing through the singer’s torn jeans.

“You shouldn’t be here at all,” Yunho snarled back, keeping his voice low so the others didn’t hear him.

“I can arrange it so you aren’t,” The man took another sip, casually smiling wickedly over the mug’s rim. “There are ways for someone on the end to get hurt…badly hurt even. Perhaps even ending their career.”

“Funny,” Yunho grabbed the keys to one of the group’s rented cars. He was willing to risk driving in Tokyo, especially late at night. He didn’t want to leave Jae alone for too long and from her text messages, Netsuke wasn’t willing to wait very long. “I was thinking the same thing about you.”

The conversation with Kimura left a bad taste in his mouth and an uneasy feeling in his stomach but Yunho hurried, watching the lights change from red to green, impatient to go on his way. He’d made a wrong turn and then another before finding himself on the right street quite by accident. Parking in front of the restaurant, he nodded hurriedly at the same fat man in white he’d seen before. If anything the man’s clothes were even dirtier and the length of ash on his cigarette appeared to be nearly three inches long but Yunho didn’t stop to marvel at the balancing act.

A knock on the red door opened it and Netsuke stood in front of him, her lush form tightly dressed in black leather pants and a pale pink tank top. He could see she wore no bra, the dark rose of her nipples showing through the fabric and their peaks ripened at the brush of cold air from outside. Her hair was swept back from one ear and sparkling diamonds ran up the length of her helix, stars captured in stone on her peach skin. A red cherry died to make the colour of her lipstick and Netsuke smiled, her sharp white teeth reminding Yunho that she was as much a predator as Kimura, if not worse.

“Come in, pretty,” She hooked her fingers into Yunho’s shirt collar, leading him further into the single room. The rattan chair had been replaced by a wide couch, its low wooden back bare of cushions. A large padded envelope lay on the coffee table, keeping a couple of open cold beers company. Picking one up, she handed it to Yunho before snagging the second, sipping at the brew. “Envelope’s yours.”

“What’s in it?” Yunho said, holding the beer awkwardly as he juggled the envelope. Putting the bottle down, he wiped his hands on his jeans and cracked open the metal tab.

“Your way to get Kimura out of your life.” Netsuke rested her arm along the back of the couch. Her fingers stroked at the line of Yunho’s spine, starting a lingering heat on his skin. “Now, have a good look and we can talk about the rest of my payment.”

“Payment?” Yunho cocked his head to look at her. “My father sent enough money to cover…”

“Cover what you’re holding in your hand, yes,” Netsuke purred. “But I was thinking more along the lines of time and expenses. You know, incidentals. I ended up with a lot of incidentals, Jung Yunho. Look in the package first and see if it’s worth your…time.”

The envelope disgorged its contents with an indelicate flush. A couple of unmarked DVDs mingled with photographs, startling images of young men and boys stretched out on a very familiar looking bed. His throat closed up, recognizing the jigsaw patterned quilt on Kimura’s bed in their apartment. Mostly nude, the photos’ subjects were in various throes of pain without a shred of pleasure in their faces. In some, Kimura was clearly seen, his face twisted into an evil grimace or exultation, enjoying the humiliation of his victims. Sickened, Yunho tried to look away but he forced himself to go through the photos, searching for familiar features — hoping in his soul that he’d not find Jaejoong among the faces.

“How did you get these?” Yunho asked, his stomach roiling. Kimura’s perversions ran beyond just Jaejoong. They stretched out behind him, fluttering demon wings soiling every life he’d ever touched. Jae wasn’t among the images, much to Yunho’s relief but he knew it would have been only a matter of time if Jae hadn’t spoken up.

“He keeps a small office at another apartment. A smaller place that I guess he brings only special guests to.” Tapping out a cigarette from a wrinkled pack, Netsuke lit the end with a stainless steel lighter, exhaling a smoke ring into the air. “He keeps this kind of stuff in a safe under the bed. It took me three times to find it. I checked out the DVDS. Pretty sick stuff.”

“What am I supposed to with these?” Yunho asked. His lungs were sticky, the breath he’d just taken lodged somewhere in his throat. “How…”

“You do what your father did to you when he got those pictures of your pretty boy and his friend. And yes, I was the one who took those,” Netsuke replied. “You take them to him, shove them under his nose and tell him to get lost. Or you’ll spread them around. Trust me, Jung, no one likes their dirty little secrets out in the open. Especially dirty little secrets like this. How long do you think a piece of shit like this would last if one of these boys’ fathers found him? Japan’s more open minded than your Korea but this…” She tapped the photos with one scarlet fingertip. “This is still sick.”

“If I do that,” Yunho said, the images blurring with the hint of tears in his eye. “I become…”

“Your father?” She laughed, a harsh sound as bitter as the cigarette smoke she breathed out. “You became your father the moment you knocked on that door, Jung Yunho. You might as well take that final step. There’s no going back now. Not if you want to protect that sweet faced little angel of yours.”

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Aug. 24th, 2009 06:57 pm (UTC)
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Aug. 24th, 2009 06:52 pm (UTC)
SPOT!
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Aug. 24th, 2009 06:52 pm (UTC)
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wedspawn
Aug. 24th, 2009 06:57 pm (UTC)
plumps pillows and pours cocoa [_]) ♥ :::grins:::
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Aug. 24th, 2009 07:01 pm (UTC)
spot!!!
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Aug. 24th, 2009 07:03 pm (UTC)
snookies. uploads cocoa. i lost my cups... hold on... [_])
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Aug. 24th, 2009 07:09 pm (UTC)
Spot!
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kohaku_chuu
Aug. 24th, 2009 08:22 pm (UTC)
argh...blackmail is a kind of two-sided thing..In this case, it's not some foul way to twist reality but to shed light on the truth -Yunho could go to court with these unlike his father with the innocent Chunjae-pics, right? At least I think so...^^;
Don't worry, Yunho -your father's not a bad guy like kimura, he's just stubborn and old-fashioned which makes him do stupid things which he's probably going to regret, once he opens his heart♥

You don't happen to have some coffee too, maybe? I'm so tired..*lol*
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wedspawn
Aug. 24th, 2009 10:02 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥ loves you. :::uploads cocoa::: [_]) ♥
puchin
Aug. 24th, 2009 09:04 pm (UTC)
oh! interesting twist! but at least it's a solution to their problems. For the longest time I thought the package would have poison, or a gun in it XD but one thing caught my attention "Regardless if he shared Jaejoong’s bed" did Jae cheat on Yunho?
wedspawn
Aug. 24th, 2009 10:18 pm (UTC)
oh no. jae didn't cheat. yunho shared jae's bed. probably my brain going off into tangents there :::Grins:::

it is a solution to their problems but it has to be dealt with ... ah, you shall see. :::grins::: heh... ♥♥♥♥

snookies and hugs.
no_mercy_again
Aug. 24th, 2009 09:23 pm (UTC)
I love you , unnie <33333. I'm sorry cuz I can't write anything. I'm so sleepy (it's 5 a.m in here now;___;) . *hugges* I can't wait your next chap >.< *kisses*
wedspawn
Aug. 24th, 2009 10:19 pm (UTC)
oh sweetie. go to bed! :::hugs you::: hope you had a good birthday! ♥♥♥♥♥ heh.

snookies and chus. love to you.
yamapilovergyal
Aug. 24th, 2009 09:41 pm (UTC)
GASP. that sicko OMG. Yunnie do the right thing! get him away from JJ for good D=

thanx for another great update! love how ur so fast =)
but i kinda get embrassed reading about yunjae now OMO have u watched the new Yunjae Couple talk yet? i swear its gonna make u think twice about writing fanfiction about them XD they know all about it LOL
wedspawn
Aug. 24th, 2009 10:23 pm (UTC)
heh... this is TOTALLY fiction. i have no doubt in my mind that this is fiction. :::Grins::: i did see the talk and i think they're probably more bashful when people think they are fighting if they don't talk to one another all the time. :::grins:::

mostly, this is purely written as a story. if anything, it probably is so far from their lives that other than ... well having their faces to think about... :::winks::: and other things... it bears no resemblance to what they're doing. although i hope they eat more than i write about.

i realize that i keep forgetting to feed them. ♥
pabogateunfish
Aug. 24th, 2009 10:48 pm (UTC)
first thing i do after i woke up was switched on my laptop and logged in to check for your update. i'm such a stalker. 8D

brb. getting johnson & joongie first. /smooches
pabogateunfish
Aug. 25th, 2009 12:00 am (UTC)
ahhhh...u're doing that suspense thing again with this chapter. i was expecting yunho to punch bastard-san's teeth in already to be honest. heh. but yes, they need to be careful, since bastard-san is someone from the company and can cause problems for them.

netsuke sounds dangerous. i wished they have scarlet in japan (because we know scarlet has her men that can go make bastard-maneejaa disappear 8D). yunho's resorting to his father's filthy scheme doesn't settle well with me...but well, a man's got to do what he's got to do to protect his loved one. somehow this gives yunho's dad earlier sham a bit of a footing..a basis, i'd say. not that i agree with what he tried to do to yunjae but i understand why he did what he did. he thought yunho was lured by jae's sin (this is right to a certain extent "8D) and which father likes their son to fall into something dangerous? we can curse yunho's dad for trying to harm jaechun, but really, understanding is not something easily earned - especially from the parents who have brought u to life.

i hope yunho didn't beat himself too hard by the thought of becoming his father. it's not all that bad, when i think about it. and jaejoong and the boys need him to be sneaky and manipulative to save their life. such moral dilemma, eonni. i swear only you can write them as complicated and human but still so, so beautiful like this. 8D

and yunjae-flirting dance teased me so much. unff. need them to go tasting and eating each other again. have to be patient. ommmmm. /calls for inner peace

♥ you. hwaiting for ten! ^^

p/s: neither joongie nor johnson has a wet bottom this time. yeay to them! /grins
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maple88
Aug. 25th, 2009 01:58 am (UTC)
After seeing Jae in a yukata, the first part of this chapter made me want him even more.... damn you, Jung Yunho, you're a lucky lucky man!

I loved this chapter more than I can express.... it's so dark!
Like it started in dark sensual mood, with all that imagery of the dark club, and Jae getting lost in the music and all of his sinewy moves. Then it turned to dark and angry the brief moment Yunho crossed Kimura at the apartment and when he goes visit Netsuke. And finally it was dark in an angsty way at the end of the chapter.

I don't know, that's how I see it anyways. There are some chapters that I see as a rain of sunshine, but this one feels like that time between midnight and 3 am.... I don't think I'm making any sense~~~

Anyways, great chapter, as usual! ♥

Oh, and hello! *waves* I've been following this story since ch. 4, and I love the SMM trilogy =], but this is the first time I review~
wedspawn
Aug. 25th, 2009 02:03 am (UTC)
oh no, that's pretty much how this chapter goes. it does get darker as the paragraphs go by. so much of this is a descent into yunho's choices and what he's willing to do to protect joongie and his members. :::nods:::

i am glad that you are able to be here. thank you so so much. :::nods::: ♥♥♥ i appreciate your reading.

snookies.

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lovelykitten8
Aug. 25th, 2009 02:19 am (UTC)
what kind of payment is she talking about?? sounds fishy and yun you are not even close at becoming like your dad
wedspawn
Aug. 25th, 2009 02:23 am (UTC)
[_])♥ ::uploads cocoa::: ♥♥♥

ah we shall find out. :::grins::: :::puts on evil hat::: ♥

:::grins:::

snookies.
cherjae
Aug. 25th, 2009 02:44 am (UTC)
dark.
but something has to be done anyway.
jap!soceity is scary sometimes... haaha

and shes the one that spread those photos and worked for ho's dad... tsk.
im thinking repayment of body y ho.

LOL

<3

wedspawn
Aug. 25th, 2009 03:12 am (UTC)
♥♥♥♥ heh. it is dark and yes, it so has to be done. japan does have some societal rules that yunho has to follow so we shall see what he does. :::nods:::

ah yes, netsuke is... a bit wicked. :D ♥♥♥

snookies.
ame_lockheart
Aug. 25th, 2009 03:22 am (UTC)
yay!
Aww Yunho D: D: *hugggles*
Yunho's not the only one who'd like to hurt K D:
I had to send the red couch back D: seems I got a little over excited and bought something much too big for my apartment xD But it was pretty and then I was all excited when I saw your story xDD LOL
<33333
wedspawn
Aug. 25th, 2009 03:27 am (UTC)
heh heh heh.. i am sure that there will be a red couch in your future. ♥♥♥

yunho would like to hurt kimura. pretty badly. :::nods::: ♥

snookies and hugs. and woot. much love.
deachan
Aug. 25th, 2009 03:23 am (UTC)
HOMG
I just read this fic and been speed reading since yesterday...omg, dear, you are truly brilliant. Just when i thought the SMM is over you gave a new story to dwell over with. This is angsty yet bittersweet. This story made me angry, sad and amazed at the same time. You really are my favourite YunJae writer! Be waiting for the next chappie!

wedspawn
Aug. 25th, 2009 03:33 am (UTC)
Re: HOMG
aw thank you. i am so glad that you liked it! :::cheers:::

cocoa? [_])♥

i always knew i was going to do OTRC but i didn't know that kimura and this was going to be in it. it kind of took me by surprise now i have to work it into the rest of the story. rather alarming i should say :::grins:::

but all in all, i'm happy with the outcome of it. it shows some progression. :::nods::: snookies. and once again. thank you! ♥
hana_kiree
Aug. 25th, 2009 03:47 am (UTC)
Go Yunho...go Yunho!!!!!!! Or give it to me and I'll finish the deed...gladly... u evil !@#$%^&*() Kimura... I can't wait~~~ Please don't turn yunho into doing sthg dumber than what he's been doing... I know he's smarter than that~~~
wedspawn
Aug. 25th, 2009 03:51 am (UTC)
heh... i dunno what yunho's going to do. :::grins::: i haven't written it yet. but we shall see! i hope he does the smart thing. it would be nice. :::nods:::

snookies and good luck to yunho! :::cheers him on::: ♥
chloe1910
Aug. 25th, 2009 03:49 am (UTC)
I'm glad that Yunho is standing up against Kimura and all of them are staying together to make sure that Kimura doesn't get the chance to go near Jae or Min alone. But sigh, why do I have the feeling that that sick bastard might try to do something while Yunho is with Netsuke.

Ah, I was expecting something violent from Netsuke like having Kimura beaten up and warned off the boys. I didn't expect her to accumulate those evidences on Kimura's perversity though. Such a sick bastard. Those poor boys.

Netsuke is asking for Yunho to pay the extra charges with his body or did I read it wrongly? I think Yunho will agree to it. Sigh, the length he goes to protect Jaejoong and the boys huh...*huggles him tight* It's the same as Jaejoong, he'll suffer everything in silence to protect those he loves. let's hope the dealings with Netsuke stops after this cause she's a dangerous person to be associated with.

Yunho ah, I know you don't want to become your father, but there is a difference between you and him. Although your father did it out of love for you, he was wrong when he did it without taking into consideration of your feelings and the actual truth to the whole Jaechun friendship, blindly assumed that Jae is a slut and sleeping around, stuffing down his thoughts and principles onto you mercilessly and refusing to accept that two men could be in love with each other.

In your case, it is the TRUTH that Kimura is a sick bastard, has abused Jae and has also threaten to harm more other members if Jae doesn't give in to his demand. You are only trying to protect the one you loves. He has also abused other young boys and you are only doing the boys a favour.

It's sad but it's also the truth that sometimes, to protect yourself from these kind of bastards, the best method to deal with them is to go down to their level.

*huggles Yunho tight*
wedspawn
Aug. 25th, 2009 03:53 am (UTC)
yes it does look like netsuke wants yunho but ah, you will see what happens. :::grins::: promise. she is a very dangerous person to be involved with and has no scruples. she will do anything she needs to in order to get what she wants.

yunho is very afraid of being like his father but oh, the choices that he's having to make for doing this... this ugly thing. he knows kimura is sick and has to be stopped. he is just at odds with himself right now.

snookies and hugs. yunho will be strong! :::cheers him on::: ♥♥♥♥♥
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stephyalexis
Aug. 25th, 2009 05:06 am (UTC)
ahh 3 chapters that i haven't read mm school just started and i no longer have anytime, hopefully i will be able to read this soon oohhh its so tempting to read now but i think sleep will will over lol, i will be back to read promise
wedspawn
Aug. 25th, 2009 05:13 am (UTC)
♥♥♥♥ no no no, you go to sleep! :::tucks you in::::

school is much more important and you need your rest. :::leaves you cookie on your pillow:::

good luck! and have a good day tomorrow! chus.
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korichan
Aug. 25th, 2009 05:47 am (UTC)
Such a cruel twist, I bet Yunho's going to seriously have to think about this. On the one hand, they're both alike because they wanted what they feel like is best for their loved one. Yunho's father thinks Jae is a bad choice, even besides the whole issue of him being gay, whereas Yunho thinks Kimura being there is a bad choice and both looked to her for help.
However, Yunho's father had moral objections to the type of love they shared and can't get over it; Yunho doesn't want Jae getting abused. Yunho's intentions might be better, but blackmailing is not going to be a good way of going about it. Then again, with someone like Kimura and the fact that they don't really seem to have anyone else, it's hard to see any other option.
wedspawn
Aug. 25th, 2009 01:32 pm (UTC)
♥ heh... i was nice. i promise. i was good to yunho. :::nods:::

and yes, yunho's father...tried. he did. ah, the blackmail. i have to see what i do at this point. :::grins::: ♥♥♥

snookies.
irerd_taga
Aug. 25th, 2009 05:55 am (UTC)
So they're going to do the blackmailing routine on Kimura eh! But will he go away quietly?
And what's with the extra payment that Netsuke's exacting from Yunho?! Not sexual favours I hope!
wedspawn
Aug. 25th, 2009 01:33 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥ she does want yunho. but ah, next chapter says.... :::winks::: ♥
jhing_tearjerky
Aug. 25th, 2009 06:01 am (UTC)
ahh, the irony of life.

thank you for nine. *runs off to read ten*

♥♥♥
wedspawn
Aug. 25th, 2009 01:37 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥ snookies :::grins::: life is VERY ironic :D
chibi_chibit
Aug. 25th, 2009 11:41 am (UTC)
Oooh. Nasty. But damn wicked! It's so awesome! I mean not that I agree with what Yunho should do that makes him become like his dad but it's still cool how things bounce back and karma hits back or something.

Really awesome. *chus*

♥♥♥♥♥♥ anata is awsome~* Hahahhahahha My japanese sucks even more. Hohohoho
wedspawn
Aug. 25th, 2009 02:05 pm (UTC)
heh. i had fun with this chapter. it was... sensual to write and yes, a bit wicked. :::grins::: heh. poor yunho. he's hating life right now. :::snookies you::: ♥
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mickey8
Aug. 25th, 2009 04:16 pm (UTC)
i always like how you write jae dancing. sensual, lithe body swaying to some erotic beats. i like that. very much so. ♥
wedspawn
Aug. 25th, 2009 04:21 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥ smooches. thank you. jae is... so much of the sensual. :::hugs:::
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