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this is for bardou who wanted YooSu angst.

LAST CHAPTER

Central: JaeChunSu
Rating: This Section is R
Genre: It's complicated. THIS IS TOTALLY AU FROM SMM. 100% off SMM. Not in any way related to So Much Mine, Lavender Bunny or anything else.

Thank you all who have read this. Many snookies and hugs for everyone. Thank you for reading along the angst. It was a bit angst. Ah, so hard to do the full emo! But I appreciate you all here and thank you again. Smooches. SMOOOCHES!

Parts: One, Two, Three, Four, Five, Six, Se7en (heh), Eight, Nine, Ten, Eleven, Twelve, Thirteen, Fourteen, Fifteen, Sixteen, Se7enteen

Yoochun smiled when he saw Yunho walk into their Japanese apartment. Carrying an armload of packages, the young man looked around for someplace to drop them and spotted Yoochun grinning at him over the kitchen counter.

“What?” Yunho slung the bags onto the counter separating the kitchen from the living area. An onion fell out, skittering over the marble only to be caught by Yoochun.

“Are you cooking?”

“No, Jaejoong is.” Yunho righted the fallen bag.

“Does he know that?”

“He should,” The older man dug a piece of umeboshi out of a package and popped the salty treat into his mouth. “He’s the one who picked out the groceries. I just carried the bags.”

“Some things never change.” Yoochun grabbed the groceries and began to put things away, barely glancing up when Jaejoong walked past them, heading to the back of the apartment. “Is he okay?”

Yunho shrugged and sucked on the candy.

“Are you okay? Both of you?” Yoochun asked, straightening up to stare Yunho down. “Do I have to kill you?”

“That would be more threatening if you weren’t wearing a pink t-shirt with Hello Kitty on it.” Yunho pointed to the offending garment, wiggling his finger at the man. “Or maybe work at getting some arm muscles. You’re scrawnier than my sister.”

The door to the apartment slammed open, rattling against the wall. A shadow stalked past them, long-legged and resolute. Changmin glanced around him as he walked, his eyes briefly touching on the faces around him before continuing down the hallway. Yunho watched their youngest go by, turning his attention back to Yoochun only when Min rounded the L and disappeared from sight.

“Huh.” Yoochun grunted, craning his neck. “He didn’t even ask why you were here.”

“He sees me all the time,” Yunho said, shrugging. “Probably doesn’t even realize I shouldn’t be. You know how he is.”

“Distracted.” Se7en stood at the end of the foyer, slipping off his shoes. “Focused on one thing and everything else can go to hell.”

“And where there is shit,” Yoochun intoned, “The smell is soon to follow.”

“Did you just call Changmin shit?” The leader’s hackles rose and he squared his shoulders, cocking his eyebrow.

“If you were going to call anyone a little shit, wouldn’t it be him?” Yoochun asked. Yunho considered it, then nodded, making Se7en laugh. “What are you doing here, Dong-Wook? And why did you bring Min with you?”

Yunho popped another piece of umeboshi in his mouth, tucking it into his cheek with his tongue. “Why is Min here? I thought we agreed you’d stall him.”

“I stalled him as long as I could. There was a goddamn hurricane and that couldn’t stall him. You expected me to?” Se7en rustled through the groceries, looking for something to snack on. Finding an apple, he bit into the fruit, sucking at the juices running over his thumb. “He found someone with a courier jet who likes your music. A few bars of some song and we had seats over to Tokyo.”

“Did he know you stalled him?” Yunho frowned, trying to remember if the apple was something Jaejoong needed to cook with.

“No, we had a blackout. I… um... used it to my advantage.”

“I don’t want to hear things like that,” Yunho said, shaking his head at Yoochun as the man leaned over the counter. “You don’t either.”

“No, I kind of do,” Yoochun disagreed. “Besides, you’re not the boss of me anymore, remember?”

The sting hung between them, the young man’s words driving nettles into Yunho’s pride. He tilted his chin up, debating what to say when Se7en stepped in.

“Hey, does that matter anymore?” He asked, hooking an arm over Yunho’s shoulders. “We’re all here. And everyone’s okay. Isn’t that all that matters?”

Yoochun and Yunho looked at one another then replied in unison, “No.”

“Don’t bother,” Junsu said, coming into the main room. “Nothing binds those two together like an argument. Although usually it’s over Jaejoong.”

“Everything is over Jaejoong,” Se7en shrugged. “I’m not even a part of this incestuous orgy you have going on between the five of you and I know that.”

“Remind me to yank out your tongue,” Yunho pointed to Se7en. Lightly pushing Junsu towards the living room, he flopped onto the couch and put his feet up on a low table. Looking around, he tsked at the pile of gaming equipment near the television console and was about to reach for a phone lying near him when Yoochun stopped him, grabbing it first.

“Are you still mad about what’s between me and Jaejoong?” Yunho looked up, his face unreadable and placid. “That’s his phone…or one of them, anyway. Any reason I shouldn’t be looking at it? Naked pictures? Bad karaoke videos?”

“It’s my phone,” Yoochun said, dangling the phone in front of Yunho’s face. “He gave it to me. And yes, I do have naked pictures on it. Mostly of your mother.”

Se7en caught Yunho before the man could make it over the coffee table, hooking one arm around the man’s stomach. Junsu grabbed his lover, yanking him back before he could get hit, the singer’s mouth gaping open at Yoochun’s brazenness. Footsteps pounded down the hallway and Jaejoong emerged, followed closely by Changmin. Crossing the room quickly, Jae shot Se7en a curious look before shoving at Yunho’s shoulder.

“Stop it.” Jae cocked his head at his best friend as Yoochun opened his mouth. “You too. Both of you stop it.”

Yunho gritted his teeth, wanting to point out Yoochun’s initial volley but shut his mouth and sat back down. Taking a deep breath, he hooked his feet back up onto the table and glared at the baritone standing across the room.

“So you all knew they didn’t fuck each other?” Min broke the tension with a hammer strike of anger. “And no one thought to tell me?”

“Well, not all of us knew everything,” Junsu admitted, guiding Yoochun to the couch set across of Yunho and sitting before pulling his lover down with him. “We all figured it out.”

“Why?” Min paced, circling around Jaejoong and nearly slamming into Se7en straddling the arm of the couch. “Why all of this? Why the hell did you put us through this?”

“Because we couldn’t let each other go,” Yunho said softly and the room stilled.

Everything around them was familiar. The scents and the sounds of their bodies from the slight rasp of Junsu’s breathing to the whistling tone of Min’s exhale as he stared up at the ceiling to come to grips with what was being laid out in front of him.

“We… answer to different things,” Jaejoong continued for his lover. “All of us are different… we can’t all follow each other’s paths. Not now.”

“Then when?” Min asked, his eyes bright and angry. “How could you leave?”

“How could you stay?” Yoochun countered, biting his lip to avoid being the first one to shed a tear. “You chose the company over us.”

“You chose each other over us,” Yunho replied.

Se7en shifted, uncomfortable as the room grew dank with unspoken words. “Maybe I should just…”

“Stay,” Jaejoong said. “No more misunderstandings between all of us. And no more heartbreak.”

“I can’t stand on stage without you,” Changmin growled, tension filling his long body. “How the hell am I supposed to do that? How the hell am I supposed to be good enough?”

“Because you were good enough before you were a part of us.” Yoochun stroked at Junsu’s back, calming the man. “You were chosen because you are good enough. You just don’t give yourself the credit you deserve.”

“They say you three carried us,” Yunho said, quiet and forceful. He met Jaejoong’s eyes, cutting the man off before he could protest. “No use arguing over it. It’s what everyone says. The voices have left Dong Bang Shin Ki. How are they going to go on with just those two?”

“Then they are assholes and don’t know you… don’t know Min,” Jae spat, drawing himself up. “We may have argued over why either of us should stay or go but there’s one thing I am not hearing from any of you; that each of us deserve to be considered the best.”

“You think that there should be two groups,” Se7en mused. “Fuck… Jaejoong…”

“I do.” Jae nodded. “For now. Even as we work out our contracts and deal with… fidelities, we are. And we should be. We need to show everyone who says we are failures without the company that we can shine without them. Just like Yunho and Changmin need to show everyone why they stood up with us to begin with; because they’d earned that right. Because they are good enough to stand on their own.”

“And when we become five again?” Yoochun nodded to Yunho. “We come back as equals. Together. No one can take that from us.”

“No one would dare try.” Junsu leaned forward, reaching for Yunho’s hand and gripping it tightly.

“For now, we wait then?” Min asked, rounding the table to grab an ottoman to sit on. Se7en moved in closer, resting his hands on his lover’s shoulders.

“Don’t wait,” Jae said. “Succeed. And when we are five, no one will able to stop us.”

“Shit,” Se7en chuckled, drawing all five pairs of eyes to him. “The world barely survived the five of you the first time. God help it the second time you hit it.”

“There are no Gods but us, right?” Yoochun teased, nudging Junsu. “Rising from the East.”

“Yes, none but us,” Yunho said, standing slowly. He went about the room, giving the others a brief hug before stopping in front of Jaejoong. Wrapping his arms around the man’s slender waist, he drew Jae close. “I’ll stand with you, Boo. Always to your left. Even if it might seem I’m not there, I will be. Okay?”

“Okay,” Jae ducked his head, shy in front of the others watching them closely. “We’re still five then? No matter what?”

“Two plus three,” Yunho whispered, touching his lover’s forehead with his own. He bend his head, intent on stealing a kiss before deciding the kiss was his anyway. With the taste of his lover in his mouth, he stared into Jae’s eyes, inhaling Jaejoong’s next breath and holding in its sweetness. “No matter how they try to divide us, two plus three is five and we will always be…five. Always.”

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ingenu3
Nov. 16th, 2010 06:10 am (UTC)
Ahhhhhh!!!! Spot! Spottttttt

/huggies you
wedspawn
Nov. 16th, 2010 06:24 am (UTC)
spot! ::::hugs::: and smooooooches. :D
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tumi18
Nov. 16th, 2010 06:30 am (UTC)
saving this umma.. will read in one go tonight.. ♥
wedspawn
Nov. 16th, 2010 06:59 am (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥ smoooooooooooooooches :::hugs:::
vermillion77
Nov. 16th, 2010 06:37 am (UTC)
OMG!!! last chapter......
wedspawn
Nov. 16th, 2010 07:00 am (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
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wedspawn
Nov. 16th, 2010 07:16 am (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥ smooches. ah, the ending. so hard to get to but i am glad i was able to. :::cheers:::

thank you for reading this, honey. i appreciate it. ::squishes::::
agnetalovek
Nov. 16th, 2010 07:53 am (UTC)
That was like a toekn speach from war @Rising of the East@
You got me there.>P
Great job as always and hoping for more in the future.
wedspawn
Nov. 16th, 2010 03:40 pm (UTC)
♥ smooches. and ah, thank you.

i wanted this to end on that note of...together. no matter what. :::nods::: i hope that it came across. :D thank you for reading this. so so much! ♥
maple88
Nov. 16th, 2010 08:31 am (UTC)
OMFG THAT ENDING T______________T
“There are no Gods but us, right?” Yoochun teased, nudging Junsu. “Rising from the East.”
Always, Chunnie. Always.

What a fluffy, and happy, and heartbreakingly beautiful ending to a rather emo story ♥

Also love the awkward Se7en :P
wedspawn
Nov. 16th, 2010 03:45 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥ smooches. and hugs. and ah, thank you. poor se7en... he's all... um... LOOK AT THE TIME! :D ♥ heh.

hugs and thank you. again. so much love. ♥
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queen_eddie
Nov. 16th, 2010 09:04 am (UTC)
Ohhh sweet ending. I would like it to be like that for real.

Are you going to go back to the SMM universe now and do G-Dragon's story????? I so want to know who he is with.
wedspawn
Nov. 16th, 2010 03:49 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥♥ heh... i have ONE crack fic to write...a HoMin and then yes, onto Ji :::grins:::

♥♥♥♥♥♥ smooches.
yunjaechunsumin
Nov. 16th, 2010 09:13 am (UTC)
It's finally done! Thank your for such a wonderful story. The ending is great, and gives so much hope. They will always be 5. Always :)
wedspawn
Nov. 16th, 2010 03:50 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥ they will always be five. :::hugs::: ♥

smooches and thank you.
chloe1910
Nov. 16th, 2010 09:22 am (UTC)
And the end.....I'm gonna miss your fic, Unnie yah. I'm glad that all 5 of them finally talked things out with each other and have the understanding and aggreement that whether they are walking the same or different path ,three plus two will always be five and that will never change.
wedspawn
Nov. 16th, 2010 03:51 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥♥ smooches and hugs. and yes, they will always be five. :::nods:::

ah, i have a crack fic to write (HoMin) and then on to Ji's story :::winks::: which of course will have the boys in it :D

hugs you. ♥
jheana
Nov. 16th, 2010 10:47 am (UTC)
Oh no it's finished. *pouts*

But every good thing must come to an end. Can't say how much I love this and all your other stories. Thank you!
thepuppeteer
Nov. 16th, 2010 11:39 am (UTC)
This is a little random but.. OH MY GOD, YOUR ICON IS SO CUTE!!!
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thepuppeteer
Nov. 16th, 2010 11:38 am (UTC)
Awsh *googly eyed*

Despite the enormous amount of angst in this fic, and the bittersweet but realistic and believable (see! I told you it would be!) ending - this fic did spark hope in my heart. I totally agree with Se7en in his last words here. The world will barely survive when DBSK come back *still googly eyed* And it will be glorious.

Honestly, your ability to make a fanFIC so realistic amazes me. It's like you have a secret peep hole and you spy on the boys 24/7. At some point I will get seriously suspicious of whether or not that is actually true. *shifty eyes*

But yay *claps* You set a goal and you reached it *more clapping* I'm, as I said be4, so proud! :D
wedspawn
Nov. 16th, 2010 04:31 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥ smooches. and hugs. and oh god no, i wish. well yeah only so i could see jae's face when yunho kisses him but beyond that, i would close the curtain and give privacy.

i'd hate myself for it but ah.... ♥

the angst! so hard! so emo! :::nods::: i wanted the ending to blend in a bit of happiness and their resolute nature. they didn't get where they are by accident. they all worked very hard. :::nods:::

and yes, HoMin :::grins::: Modern :::winks::: ♥ maybe a long one shot :D or two short.
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corinaidao
Nov. 16th, 2010 12:11 pm (UTC)
OMG UNNIE~ Here it is? WAI SO FAST. HUHUHU :((( Still can't believe that this fic is over. :(

STILL, AMAZING
wedspawn
Nov. 16th, 2010 04:35 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥ 18 chapters. pretty long sorta. :::Grins::: only novellas now. no long books. those break my brain :D but yes, it is over. and thank you baby! :::hugs::: smooches.
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chelsea101jung
Nov. 16th, 2010 12:52 pm (UTC)
g2g to school but will definitely read soon >.
wedspawn
Nov. 16th, 2010 04:37 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥ have fun! DO WELL!
stephyalexis
Nov. 16th, 2010 01:27 pm (UTC)
Nooo it can't be over ahh
Cute ending, hopeful and sweet, loved so much
wedspawn
Nov. 16th, 2010 04:38 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥ sorry, it is over but ah, i have a HoMin in the works (Crack Fic) and then... Ji's Unobtainable :D ♥
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kanamay
Nov. 16th, 2010 01:30 pm (UTC)
Ahh~~ i love it so much~~♥
wedspawn
Nov. 16th, 2010 04:45 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥ aw thank you! :::hugs::: ♥
chibi_chibit
Nov. 16th, 2010 03:00 pm (UTC)
*chus* and that wraps this up! Somehow it totally feels like a part of SMM even though it wasn't suppose to be. Your story always progress with the boys. Love it like that :)
wedspawn
Nov. 16th, 2010 04:46 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥ i wanted to end on a positive note. not perfect but together :::nods:::

smooches and hugs. and chus! ♥
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purpledna
Nov. 16th, 2010 03:01 pm (UTC)
ahhh such a beautiful end in such troubling times.
wedspawn
Nov. 16th, 2010 04:47 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥ it is all about faith. :::nods:::

smooooches and hugs. ♥ thank you.
ekin_hardy
Nov. 16th, 2010 04:11 pm (UTC)
“I’m not even a part of this incestuous orgy you have going on between the five of you and I know that.”

i laughed so hard at that.....but it stops there,, then i started to cry bcoz it hurt so much towards the ending~~~
wedspawn
Nov. 16th, 2010 04:48 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥ heh.... ah, it does hurt a bit but... they are together. in their hearts and spirits. and yes, working towards the day when they will stand as 5 = 1 again :::nods:::
damaged_psyche
Nov. 16th, 2010 04:35 pm (UTC)
AH! AH! AH! AH! Currently squealing before I get round to strangling you =p Love this chapter sooooooooooooooo much!!!!!!!!!

****Time passes****

How could you?!?!?!!? Lol. When I saw the post title... FINAL CHAPTER, I was all O______O D=!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMM!!!!!! I'm too hooked on your writing -.- XD And I was hoping for a longer chapter, lol.

But... it was short yet sweet. I love Yunho and Yoochun's banter, just slipping back into it as if nothing happened but Changmin better not have known that they called him shit!!!!! XD I just love your perception of the relationship between the five of them and to each other, and, bb, you have no idea how much I really really hope it's like that truly. I love how you also touched on the issue of JYJ being the voices etc but you also reinforced the fact that Chagmin and Yunho were also chosen to be in DBSK, not just JYJ.

“Shit,” Se7en chuckled, drawing all five pairs of eyes to him. “The world barely survived the five of you the first time. God help it the second time you hit it.”

“There are no Gods but us, right?” Yoochun teased, nudging Junsu. “Rising from the East.”

WIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! TEH WIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm glad Yunho spoke the last line, no idea why, but I do. I think many of us have been too focussed on 5-1/5-2/5-3 = 0 that we never thought of 3+2/2+3 = 5 and I'm happy you put it that way - you've renewed my faith in them.

I guess I need to thank you. You have no idea how much your writing has inspired/helped me, made me laugh, experience lots of emotions but most importantly, to have faith/to believe.

~ALWAYS KEEP THE FAITH~
damaged_psyche
Nov. 16th, 2010 04:39 pm (UTC)
Wah, long arse comment! XD First time I've ever written one like that! It means you're special! XD ^^
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yamapilovergyal
Nov. 16th, 2010 05:53 pm (UTC)
there was a moment of peace and quiet in my heart reading this. i shed tears but of the joy that they will return as 5 as one. thats something i will cry over no matter how many times i see it.
wedspawn
Nov. 16th, 2010 07:53 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥♥ smooches and hugs. and yes, i do believe... that they WANT to come back as five. I hope they do. I hope they can and soon.::::hugs:::

smooooches and snookies. ♥
kurogoma
Nov. 16th, 2010 05:56 pm (UTC)
i have been reading but haven't been commenting... xD

We need to show everyone who says we are failures without the company that we can shine without them. Just like Yunho and Changmin need to show everyone why they stood up with us to begin with; because they’d earned that right. Because they are good enough to stand on their own.”

my favorite bit, i wish fandom can see it that way.
hopefully, with homin's comeback, they can prove the second part of the above correct. &hearts
wedspawn
Nov. 16th, 2010 07:55 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥ it will take some time but i do hope that they are given that chance. i do.

they got there on their own merit. and while i hope they would want to be standing next to the other three, the world DOES need to see them standing on their own. if only so they gain faith in themselves. :D ♥

snookies
ch0cola
Nov. 16th, 2010 06:01 pm (UTC)
omg this was so cute... ;___;

And THIS was funny:
"And yes, I do have naked pictures on it. Mostly of your mother.” Ahaha I couldn't stop laughing!

I'm really sad that that's the end now... but tell me, what are your next projects? anything you recommend to me? I need this daily/weekly dose of you fics... somehow xD
wedspawn
Nov. 16th, 2010 08:05 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥ :::hugs::: ah, yeah i thought i'd give chun a snarky line :::grins:::

my next projects are a one/two shot HoMin Crack-ish fic. :D

And then... the Ji-Unobtainable/SMM novella :D which will also be... romancy fluff. more like tarnished angels probably.

aish, soooo many good authors out there.
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anime76
Nov. 16th, 2010 06:46 pm (UTC)
Interesting ending. Both YJ have their own ideas of how things should be & both have decided for the kids (LOL) on what needs to be done now.

Once again you have made a fic that can actually fit into the RL. oh..all the possibilities out there & this one, i really like. Separated for now, prove themselves to their own selves & to others, and then come back as equals - beautiful! *clapping*
wedspawn
Nov. 16th, 2010 08:20 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥ there are SO many possibilities for this really and i wanted the ending to be... hopeful :D ♥

they do need to prove to themselves, i think. once that happens, i think everyone will feel better :::nods:::
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reya13
Nov. 16th, 2010 06:54 pm (UTC)
“That would be more threatening if you weren’t wearing a pink t-shirt with Hello Kitty on it.” Yunho pointed to the offending garment, wiggling his finger at the man. “Or maybe work at getting some arm muscles. You’re scrawnier than my sister.”

this is worth a billion dollars kekeke

aaaa
this ending was so so sweet
and good for the story
how should i say it?? it fits! ^^

great story darling, really great!

i can't wait to read new ones *huggles*
wedspawn
Nov. 16th, 2010 09:44 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥

heh. smooches and hugs. i'm glad you liked it and yes, i wanted a bit of snark in the last bit. just teasing.. and a bit of family brother stuff. :::grins:::

smooches and hugs and thank you! ♥
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