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Whispering Stars: Part Four [FINAL]
Pairing: YooSu
Rating: NC-17 [LEMON]

Section: One, Two, Three

Summary: When words and time create a distance between two beating hearts, Yoochun and Junsu must decide if their love can be resurrected from the ashes of their pain.
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Apr. 4th, 2011 01:18 pm (UTC)
:) It was good to see the hyenas angsty for once... but I like it better when they are sunshine and rainbows!

You did a great job making them all sturm and drang! I love the way you write, and the stories that you have creeping about in your head! Thank you for pulling them out and sharing them with us!
Apr. 4th, 2011 09:25 pm (UTC)
oh yes, the hyenas are quite angsty here but oh they kiss and make up well. :::Grins:::: smooches and i'm glad you liked it. thank you!

Apr. 4th, 2011 04:37 pm (UTC)
*squeals and rolls around in the loveliness that is YooSu* Oh, Yoochun, somehow sorrow seems to fit you, my love. God, bb, you have a way of bringing words alive!!!!!
Apr. 4th, 2011 09:27 pm (UTC)
sorrow does fit yoochun. he's the "emotional" one and ah, i wanted to play into that sometimes. especially here in this angst love piece. :::Grins:::

smooches baby and hugs!
Apr. 5th, 2011 12:35 am (UTC)
I've been starving for a good fic. Especailly good Yoosu fic. I loved the story and last part was just wonderful. Just the thing I needed) ♥♥♥
Apr. 5th, 2011 02:40 am (UTC)
Snookies and hugs! I am glad that you liked it! YooSu is always fun to write. ::::grins:::: haato!
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Apr. 5th, 2011 03:37 am (UTC)
I cant believe this is the end
I want more yoosu noo
this was cute needed more angst lol but loved so much
Apr. 5th, 2011 03:48 am (UTC)
::::::hugs:::: ah baby, yoosu is so much love. aren't they? ::::Grins::: heh... it was a bit angst but wanted to make sure they fell back in love.
Apr. 5th, 2011 03:42 am (UTC)
Wanted to comment yesterday for some weird reason LJ just can't be accessed.

I love how sorrow was described. Somehow the expression you use always get to me.

All said & done, this is a really bittersweet & yet reassuring ending for Yoosu. Bitter due to the distress both felt, sweet when they finally understood where they stand in each other's existance and reassuring due to the never letting go part. LOL sometimes i wonder if your fics can be made into a movie.
Apr. 5th, 2011 03:49 am (UTC)
ah, i do try to write them very "movie-ish" at times. this one for sure. this is a reunion story and while i wanted it to be melodramatic, i wanted them to end in a loving and sweet way.

the sorrow thing came to me a couple of days ago. i thought, ah... sorrow must numb the senses like cigarettes. how would it flavour a man's world? :::nods::

smooches and snookies and hugs.
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Apr. 5th, 2011 02:41 pm (UTC)
snookies! ah, i am glad that you liked it. i was happy when that imagery came into my thoughts the other day. it seemed to fit yoochun.

thank you. snookies!
Apr. 5th, 2011 10:18 am (UTC)
awwww...so sweet...
i totally can imagine Yoochun picking up on Junsu's clothes and his other junk while he's keep on littering inside Yoochun's room kekekekekkee
Apr. 5th, 2011 02:42 pm (UTC)
::::grins:::: heh... oh yes, i can see junsu throwing his things about. :::grins::: heh. smoooooches. and hugs.
Apr. 5th, 2011 12:15 pm (UTC)
OMGGGG... that was HOT smex LOLLLL... I WUV~~~! And the ending was so sweeet~~~! You always write great things for my OTPs xD hahahahahha. LOVELY~~! I miss reading them so much :3333 Keep up the fabulous job unnie~~~!
Apr. 5th, 2011 02:45 pm (UTC)
::::hugs::: ah, thank you baby. i wanted this to be a bit dramatic and a bit sweet. smooches and i am glad you liked it! haato!
Apr. 5th, 2011 02:33 pm (UTC)
awwwwwwwwww...tat was so loving, i felt like qn intruder just from reading this...much much love~!
Apr. 5th, 2011 02:46 pm (UTC)
::::grins:;:: ah, thank you. and no, we're just "peeking" :::winks:::
Apr. 6th, 2011 07:24 pm (UTC)
Forgiving yoochun can be sucha saint. only towards junsu though lol he is rather stoic and tends to immerse himself in his own world. but he is sucha hopeless romantic with su :3

yoosu need each other. im so glad they had coughawesomemakeupsexcough and most importantly they are rebuilding their love <33

*sends you my love and kisses*
Apr. 6th, 2011 07:31 pm (UTC)
snookies and hugs... and yes, he is a hopeless romantic about susu. that is his love. he is. :::grins:::

:::winks::: you've seen them in bed together. :::laughs:::

so much fun. and make up sex is always good. ::hugs:::
Apr. 8th, 2011 06:33 am (UTC)
Heh...just wanted to show you this pic.
I saw it and immediately thought of SMM where Yoochun is crowing his victory over Jaejoong on the sofa.XD

ps - I'll be back to read the YooSu eventually, right now I can't take anything angsty. A little sad-for-no-reason at the moment.

(Again, can't wait to see what you have in store for JaeSu!)
Apr. 8th, 2011 02:43 pm (UTC)
:::hugs::: heh... that is SO where Yoochun is crowing over his victories :::Grins:::

ah this yoosu was a bit angsty but it became happy. i hope you feel better, baby. hugs!
Apr. 8th, 2011 06:43 pm (UTC)
Haven't been here for so long, I missed the contest! *sobs* Oh well, I need to save money to buy Lavender Bunny, I really love it, it's still your best story in my opinion.

Anyway, this story is great, full of YooSu love <3 I can't praise you enough for all the details and descriptions.

PS Next time JunChun, ne? :D
Apr. 8th, 2011 09:37 pm (UTC)
Ah, i do owe a JunChun don't I? :::hugs:::

Where do you live? Shipping for books can be so expensive!

This was angsty but oh so love for the YooSu. ::::Grins::: I am very glad you liked it. Thank you.

Snookies and kisses and hugs.
Apr. 27th, 2011 04:16 am (UTC)
wonderfully written~^^

i seem to be finding myself reading more YooSu lately~^^ i loved reading the angst and the pain and the hurt... at least YooSu got back together... but that little bit of YunJae you wrote tore at me~ that's just... TT^TT

thanks for sharing this story~^^
Apr. 27th, 2011 04:45 am (UTC)
snookies and hugs and smooches.

ah the yunjae. i wanted to slide that in there because it would be a reality between YooSu. i might go back and deal with that. :::grins::: maybe. i dunno. right now the JaeSu is kicking me. :::winks:::

snookies and i'm glad you liked it!
Apr. 29th, 2011 11:04 am (UTC)
Apr. 29th, 2011 04:13 pm (UTC)
snookies. thank you :D i'm glad you liked it!
Apr. 30th, 2011 03:17 pm (UTC)
Just finished reading this. Sorry to have missed your fics. I've been a little busy lately.

I'm so glad Yoosu got back together. Thanks for another amazing story! Now I will read the Min7en short fic! :)
Apr. 30th, 2011 05:21 pm (UTC)
it is quite okay. and are you doing well? :::hugs:::: snookies! and thank you for reading! hugs!
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