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An Angel's Crime [12] [LAST CHAPTER]
Pairing: Jaejoong and Junsu (apparently Yoochun and Yunho / Min7en too)
Rating: NC-17

Summary: Junsu discovers an emptiness in his heart and is afraid the only person who can fill it is someone too broken...too afraid to be loved.

Sections: One, Two, Three, Four, Five, Six, Se7en, Eight, Nine, Ten, Eleven

For Maria, Scarletpeonies, Calyto and most of all, my Ree.CutCollapse )


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Sep. 6th, 2011 10:38 pm (UTC)
heh.... oh yes, for them... it is a huge thing. :::grins::: and well, they can't marry so this is pretty much their wedding night. :::grins:::

smooches and hugs and i am glad you liked it. :::hugs::::
Sep. 6th, 2011 10:30 pm (UTC)
;w; <33333333333

i don't have any words to say at the moment, so...<33333
Sep. 6th, 2011 10:38 pm (UTC)
hugs and smooches! i am glad you like it. :::squishes:::
Sep. 6th, 2011 10:33 pm (UTC)
wow it finally came when the two accepted each other completely...i really loved this and i love the way u wrote it all, the way they expressed what they were feeling was amazing...this was really great ^_^
Sep. 6th, 2011 10:40 pm (UTC)
oh yes, they finally came to one another with their hearts and arms open. :::nods::: smooches and haato!
Sep. 7th, 2011 04:06 pm (UTC)
i am so so late. but.

this is just perfect. i love the sun and dark themes - perfect metaphors to this perfect couple.
Sep. 7th, 2011 06:02 pm (UTC)
smooches and hugs. hello! and no, you are not late. :::squishes::: thank you for reading!
Sep. 7th, 2011 06:03 pm (UTC)
Perfect. This was everything I was hoping for when they finally got together. Loved the poetry. JaeSu is just utter love for me and I'm so happy to get a JaeSu fic from you. I know they aren't one of your favorite pairings so I'm grateful not only for the fic, but also that you didn't give up on it. Much love^^ <3<3<3
Sep. 7th, 2011 06:19 pm (UTC)
snookies and hugs. :::squishes::: ah, while not my favourite pairing, i do enjoy a challenge. and oh, jaesu is difficult to write for me. i think i can write chunjae before i can do jaesu and that is HARD. heh. but this was easier than HoMin. i shall probably never again write a HoMin. It hurt the brain too much.

:::pets my YunJae:::: ah, my beloved idiots.


much love and i hope you liked their story. i wanted it...sweet. i could see them being sweet. snookies!
Sep. 9th, 2011 12:54 am (UTC)
*eye smile*
this will have a special place in my heart for a long time <3
their an unexpected but sweet couple and I think you helped give us readers insight as to how their relationship coming together was so difficult. I still picture them the best of friends but I love that you also tried to pair them yup, a great success~! <3

*hugs* take a break hun you deserve it!
Sep. 28th, 2011 06:11 am (UTC)
hello! ::::hugs:::: i don't think my comment posted here which is of the suck because i REMEMBER posting a comment! ::::hugs:::: and yes, i see them as the best of friends :::winks:::

love love and snookies!
Sep. 28th, 2011 05:46 am (UTC)
I found you again, and I love the ending of this. JaeSu together is probably one of the most perfect couples ever.
Sep. 28th, 2011 06:10 am (UTC)
snoooooookies! hello! :::waves:::: heh... aw, thank you! the junsu and jaejoong story was very sweet to write. i hope they made you happy.
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Oct. 21st, 2011 04:22 pm (UTC)
I finally finished it! *-*y

I was surprised at Jae's confession when he said that he and Yunho never done it. I was a bit sad, but of course it's a JaeSu FF so it was the right thing in the situation, and I was happy thinking of JaeSu :)

I'm a bit confused about MinSe7en baby thing I have to say... XD
I was hoping to have some more info about tha matter since it sounded interesting >-<

And at the end JJ finally gave up all his worries! :)
Everything was all right, happy ending :)

Hope there'll be a PDF file soon <3

Thanks for writing, you're always my favourite writer ♥♥♥
Oct. 24th, 2011 10:30 pm (UTC)
hello sweetie... :::hugs::: heh. se7en and min... ah, they are.. .complicated. perhaps i'll expand on that later.

and yay for JJ. so much the love for the jae. :::Grins:::
Nov. 26th, 2011 03:21 pm (UTC)
hey you've seemed to have disappeared..everything ok?
Nov. 26th, 2011 05:35 pm (UTC)
:::waves::: Hi honey! Yep, everything is okay. I announced I was going to take a hiatus because I have books to write. :::grins::: But I'll be back. Thank you for thinking of me. Snookies. Are you doing well? Life doing good?
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Dec. 4th, 2011 12:31 pm (UTC)
Once again your written world takes over the reader. The depth of love and commitment you present here (both Jaesu and Min7en) is mind-blowing.

It's been so long since I've seen this I must reread it all again.

Thank you as always for your work.
Dec. 4th, 2011 08:50 pm (UTC)
Smooooooches. Thank you baby.
Jun. 19th, 2012 02:31 pm (UTC)
You're getting a blanket comment for all the chapters.

This was so amazing even though I sometimes felt like crying. I love that Junsu is what helps Jae heal. Jaesu made me go 'aww' and tear more times than I can count. I totally chocked up at this line, “If I were one of God’s angels, then he’s cast me out like he did Lucifer,” The man snorted. “If anyone’s an angel, it’s you, Junsu-ah. Even your mother thinks so.” Poor Jae /sniffs/ and then I just went aww at this line, "Will you be my sunshine, Susu-ah? Will you bring me the light that I need around me?”

Can you tell, I really really reall love them!

I love Min7en in general they're just... I don't even know how to explain.

Yoochun I love just not with Yunho (this version). I just couldn't get myself to side with Yunho. I could deal with Yoochun and even love Yoochun's character but Yunho was another story.

I just found Yunho so selfish and it got me so annoyed with him. It could be because Jae is totally my puppy (I know, weird but I just want to cuddle and squish him) and I would cause some serious damage to whoever hurt my puppy...

You really do know how to twist my emotions and get them all jumbled up and props to you for that. It's a testament to just how well you write. Everything seems so real that it can hurt because not everything is happiness in reality. I love that you go there and we get to see both sides of love; happy and sad.
Jun. 19th, 2012 04:11 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥ Ah, poor Yunho was the bad guy in this fic. Poor thing. He suffered so much as a character under my keyboard. So so poorly I treated him. ::::grins:::

The JaeSu in this was... so difficult to write because they both are angelic but one is bright and the other is dark. They are flip sides of the same coin. Min7en, well ... they are just fun to write. :::grins:::

I am glad you liked this! ::::hugs::: Smooches and thank you. So so much. Really. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
Jun. 22nd, 2012 05:12 pm (UTC)
oh my God ... oh my God!... so many emotions reading this... just... oh my God!... questions (which resolved themselves in the end), anger, sadness, sorrow, relieve, love... i frowned, confused, close to tears, smiled a little, smiled wide and exhaled a big breath at the end of this story...

oh, forgive my english... i just can't conjure good sentences now... and english is my second language

i hope my comment is good enough.. he he...
Jun. 22nd, 2012 05:20 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥ oh this was a hard one to write. and your english is fine :::hugs::: many of my relatives have English as a second or third language. Please, do not apologize. You should be proud to have mastered it! :::CHEERS YOU ON:::

This definitely was a deep breath at the end fic. :::grins:::

Nov. 4th, 2012 07:09 pm (UTC)
Came to re-read this wonderfull story. I think it was the very first one that showed me that jaesu is beautiful and yunho not always deserve Jaejoong. And in in this fic, for hurting Jae so much, I would prefered him lonely and regreating it forever.
Nov. 5th, 2012 08:18 pm (UTC)

sometimes, the pain of being alone is the worst cut.
Nov. 18th, 2012 06:33 pm (UTC)
why i'm about to cry ??? truly so many emotions >.< !!JaeSu is truly the light !!
gosh !!! to say the truth it's my first JaeSu fic i really liked !!
thanks for sharing !!!
i loved the part with min7en so much !!! i'm telling that pairing is LOVE LOVE LOVE !!!

Edited at 2012-11-18 06:34 pm (UTC)
Nov. 18th, 2012 06:38 pm (UTC)
Ah, JaeSu is very difficult for me to write... because you know... I ship YunJae hard core but oh, it was a challenge so I wanted to take it *grins*
Oct. 3rd, 2014 11:40 pm (UTC)
I.. just... DAMN, woman! This was... just...

I cried buckets! BUCKETS! But I'm happy everyone got their happy ending.

....even if I want to kick Yunho in the ass a bit. Or have Junsu do it.
Oct. 4th, 2014 02:06 am (UTC)
hah :D
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