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Tarnished Angels (SMM Universe) Section 22

Title: Tarnished Angels
Section: 22
Pairing: Min/Other (some jaeho and yoosu along the way)

Section Rating: R
Overall Rating: NC-17
Blame: ranalore

Summary: Hot Korean boys. A seduction. An alluring. A temptation. And Min's self-discovery.

Sections: One, Two, Three, Four, Five, Six, Se7en, Eight, Nine, Ten, Eleven (Lemon), Twelve; Thirteen; Fourteen; Fifteen, Sixteen; Se7enteen; Eighteen; Minteen; Twenty; Twenty-One (Lime)

Related Fics: So Much Mine and Lavender Bunny. Links go to PDFs. Other related fics can be found at my LJ: wedspawn

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cluvy
Jun. 24th, 2007 03:22 am (UTC)
AMAZING. The jaemin at the front bit is so OMG *squeal* Jaejoong gives good advice=) and LOL. yunho and SE7EN are trashing it out again. Sighs. The ending is just <3 I really love it. min should just eat up SE7EN or smth like that XD ah. I really love how your writing makes me laugh.

Oh I noticed something.
“Joongie-ah,” The leader had gone through one book and was halfway through another manga when Min finally spoke. “When you fell in love with Yunho, did you know immediately?
Jaejoong.. = Leader? O.o
wedspawn
Jun. 24th, 2007 05:56 am (UTC)
did i mention i was writing this at 2 am? :::grins::: ♥♥♥
thank you! i fixed it. :::grins:::

i wanted to put some jaemin and then yunho and se7en. it was a lot of fun to write this one. heh... min should eat se7en up. ♥♥♥

thank you. and snuggles. ♥♥♥
maryl_z
Jun. 24th, 2007 05:07 am (UTC)
List, cause I'm tired and want my bed but want to comment to.

-JaeJoong and ChangMin cuddling in bed
-YunHo's assholeness explained
-ChangMin showing up unannounced at SE7EN's apartment
-The kiss
-Last line

All love. All FTW!
<333
wedspawn
Jun. 24th, 2007 06:12 am (UTC)
oh. jaemin... :::hugs::: werne't they cute? i adore them.

yunho's assholeness is explained. :::hugs::: ♥♥♥

and yes, minnie. ah, so se7en's surprise. and the kisses are always nice. and their lines. ♥♥♥

i like lines. smooches. and hugs. and thank you. ♥♥♥
wh1tel1ly
Jun. 24th, 2007 09:39 am (UTC)
Oh JaeHo such a great parents...
They care about u Min..

Min-7en. Fighting.


ILU ._.
wedspawn
Jun. 24th, 2007 05:15 pm (UTC)
ah, thank you! jaeho are good parents and they do care about min. a lot :::nods:;:

min7en fighting indeed! ♥♥♥ snookies. and thank you! ♥
already
Jun. 24th, 2007 10:13 am (UTC)
LOVES MUCHLY!

off to doctor. brb with a more coherent comment because I want to heee :D
already
Jun. 24th, 2007 02:15 pm (UTC)
bacckuu!

there are so many things to love in this chapter *_____*

yunho's budding camaraderie with se7en, i love it, they're so alike i've always thought that they will be good friends.
and min coming over shocked the daylights out of me >_____<
i can see the hotness of the next chapter already *prepares tissue to wipe blood*

and we know that we love jae yes? of course! :DD

i know everyone's favorite line is the last line (which is also love), but mine is this:

The room smelled like the two older men, a blend of masculinity and gentle softness. Nearly picture perfect clean, the only sign of a mess were stacks of CDs on a long table, haphazard towers of music left for them to dig through. Changmin secretly loved this room more than any other in the house. It gave him a sense of strength and family every time he walked through the door. He especially loved the enormous bed set in the middle of the floor. It could hold all five of them and had, sometimes they just lay tangled into one another talking and laughing or sometimes even listening to a few of them harmonizing through a song.
it's just.. beautiful to picture.

*glomps you*

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mumbles
Jun. 24th, 2007 10:32 am (UTC)
“I want you to be my lover, Se7en. My lover and friend. Can you be that for me?” I'm sure he can do that for you Changmin!

“Why put a name on what you have? As long as you have it, does it need a label as long as both of you are happy?”
I agree with this. Such insightful words.

Thanks for the update.
wedspawn
Jun. 24th, 2007 05:18 pm (UTC)
thank you! ♥♥♥ i've always felt that your relationship with someone doesn't need to be defined by the constructs of society. whatever works for you should work. :::nods:::

many thanks and snookies
bitterkoekjes
Jun. 24th, 2007 01:45 pm (UTC)
“Min-seven hwaiting!”

I got to that part and I just had to post something about it... I LOVE YOU CHANGMIN!! XDDD

“I want you to be my lover, Se7en. My lover and friend. Can you be that for me?”

Now... that one is lovely... *twirls*

Right, so next chapter will be full of whirlwind and lots of sex? XDD hahahha... Wuv you! I'm not expecting any lemony chapters anytime soon, actually... because I want more of se7en's wits and Min's kitty steps... they're just so cute to read XDD

*smooches & huggles&
wedspawn
Jun. 24th, 2007 05:35 pm (UTC)
heh... thank you. i had to put a min7en reference in there for minnie to say. :::nods::: ♥♥♥

and yes, min has committed to what he wants and well, the next chapter will be... i don't know yet. but i'll know in 8 hours or so.

snookies and thank you! ♥
jaejoonghearts
Jun. 24th, 2007 03:47 pm (UTC)
“I want you to be my lover, Se7en. My lover and friend. Can you be that for me?”

*gonna kick se7en's ass if he says NO*

*throws confetti,kisses,hugs to you!*

nicely done!this fic is a friggin stress reliever!can't wait for the next section to come out! yayayay again
wedspawn
Jun. 24th, 2007 06:01 pm (UTC)
heh... ♥♥♥ i don't think se7en will say no. we'll see though. i might be posting a later, short section because i badly need a nap :)

i'm glad you like it! thank you! snookies. ♥♥
kimonoqueen
Jun. 24th, 2007 04:29 pm (UTC)
Before I read this...
If you go here http://asianfanatics.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=402138 and scroll down to Minnie's section, on question number 55 he says his favourite number is... 7!!! Just wanted to share that hahaha
wedspawn
Jun. 24th, 2007 06:04 pm (UTC)
Re: Before I read this...
aw, how cute! :::grins:: ♥♥♥ it's destiny! ♥♥♥
tachikoma09
Jun. 24th, 2007 04:30 pm (UTC)
“Here. Maybe you’ll get drunk and fall off the balcony.”

“Thanks. Why don’t you get drunk so I can push you off first?”

LMAO!The odd couple somewhat...like two grumpy men out to kill each other....poor changmin ==

thank you for updating!
wedspawn
Jun. 24th, 2007 06:06 pm (UTC)
heh... they are grumpy. but min will be the reason they get along for as much as they can. ♥♥

snookies. and thank you! ♥
wmelon_kaiye
Jun. 24th, 2007 04:44 pm (UTC)
[prepares to bake a batch of LEMON cookies]
(coughs) ^^;;

Ah, the Se7en and our Yunnie getting along? How quaint XD
teeheehee

I adored the Jae moment... awkward yet doesn't fail to tug a giggle or a smirk
“I took off my pants for him.” ROFL..we know you did Min D=

[utter nosebleed] (splutters)
I feel almost pedophilic for some reason...why? >.<
Min isn't a baby, but this...this whole thing just feels young... it reminds you of a level of innocence that the amount of touching and groping and COUGHS cannot possibly elude to... >.>

D= (confused)

(goes to bake cookies)
wedspawn
Jun. 24th, 2007 06:12 pm (UTC)
ah, min is very young as far as experience and yes, he is an adult so you're not that bad. :::hugs:: ♥♥♥

yunho and seven getting along is... well, as much as they're going to get at this moment. and it's for min.

snookies and hugs. i'm glad you're liking it. it's been fun to write. alot of fun :) ♥♥♥
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fantasylove4ev
Jun. 25th, 2007 03:26 am (UTC)
hehehe. i love this chapter. the talk between se7en and yunho was really sweet, especially the part where se7en called jaejoong the wife. we are finally getting somewhere with the mine7en. YEAH!!
wedspawn
Jun. 25th, 2007 03:29 am (UTC)
ah, thank you! :::grins:: se7en and yunho are good to tease one another. always good fun. smooches and snookies. ♥♥

snookies.
kimonoqueen
Jun. 25th, 2007 11:30 pm (UTC)
Dammit Se7en better say yes or I'mma castrate him!

I see you spammed your own LJ with chapters so now I'm light years behind as opposed to regular earth years... I'll catch up.

Something that made my eyes sparkle was where you wrote, '“I miss being the youngest and I hate being the oldest.” Jae stuck his tongue out.' I thought, OMG IT'S TRUE! So no wonder JJ is always pouting and mooning away. He's used to being the ickle one, the cutie baby, AND fawned over by all older females. Wow that explains everything lol And now I want to huggle him even more! (in bed... while he is reading his manga....)
wedspawn
Jun. 26th, 2007 02:43 am (UTC)
♥ it did sort of end up spamming the chapters. i promise that se7en is very... um...se7en. ♥♥♥

he is used to being the baby. and has forfeited the "eldest" label to yunho. :::nods::: he likes being the cute little one. :::nods::: ♥♥♥ well, yeah, snuggling in bed is adorable. especially when jae is there.

snookies and hugs. ♥
audient
Jul. 2nd, 2007 03:13 pm (UTC)
“Why do you call him Se7en?”

YEAH MIN WHY. I've been wondering, too :o It's like hearing YunHo call Jae 'Hero' or Jae call YunHo 'U-know'. It bugged me a bit but as the story progressed, it obviously fell behind on my priority list XD

Also! Remember when I tell you about the perfect YunJae-parents fic a couple section earlier? Yeah. The first scene made me think of childhood and master bedrooms and sunday mornings with my brother and sister and my parents. We don't do that anymore ;_; I don't know why.

If he planned things right, they could really toss Se7en off the balcony and move in.

.... Oh God XD

The first part of YunHo/Se7en scene was like watching verbal tennis match between two alpha males. That said, it was fun x3

And the reunion! of course \o/ I cheered with them. Thank you for this :') ♥
wedspawn
Jul. 2nd, 2007 03:34 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥ smooches.

the letter touched on why he's called Se7en more than dong-wook. i go into it more as the fic goes along. ♥

yunjae is very nice in this. i enjoy having their interactions as the fic goes along :::nods:: ♥
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wedspawn
Mar. 30th, 2008 03:17 am (UTC)
ah, you are back. smooches and hugs. :::grins:::

heh... i loved writing this bedroom scene. it was nice to have jae and min together.

snookies.
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