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Title: Tea and Shadows (SMM Universe)
Author: wedspawn
Pairing: YunJae/JaeHo
Genre: Smut
Rating: NC-17
One-Shot

Jae is always questioning their relationship and Yunho has an answer that he wants Jae to hear.
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daiichisan
Jul. 13th, 2008 08:17 pm (UTC)
Hmm...I commented but it disappeared...

Ah, well...I forgot what I said in the other one...

But I'm pretty sure it was along the lines of you're awesome and I love everything you write. Not just because I've loved your past works but because you really never disappoint. And this...your beautiful YunJae...Gaaah *melts*

iFLy!!!

oh...and I'm pretty sure I said something like...MIN7EN!
wedspawn
Jul. 13th, 2008 10:55 pm (UTC)
ah, i got your comment :::grins:: heh... thank you.

and yes... min7en! :::cheers::: ♥♥♥♥
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wedspawn
Jul. 14th, 2008 01:43 am (UTC)
thank you. so so much. :::blushes:::

i sometimes like to revisit old arguments and insecurities. things don't change overnight and its a slow process for jae to heal. i did want to show that evolution of their relationship.

and well, lemon. yunjae sometimes deserves lemon. :::grins:::

snookies and thank you. very much.
puchin
Jul. 14th, 2008 04:33 am (UTC)
Oh I have missed you....
It's been a while my friend :) you know, as a, I admit, notoriously "silent-reader" when it comes to many fanfictions (and I apologize profusely for that), I have always and will always feel compelled to comment on your writing (especially Yunjae, my OTP). But as a fan of exceptional writing like everyone one else here, who can help it? You have a style of writing that infuses senses with words that creates imagery like no other. I have to say, the line “The two of you are like lovesick cows staring over a fence” had me laughing pretty hard XD
-Always a fan
wedspawn
Jul. 14th, 2008 04:39 am (UTC)
Re: Oh I have missed you....
snookies and hugs. :::offers cookies::: i am so glad to see you. many hugs.

i'm glad you liked them. i adore the yunjae. they are so great to write for. and yoochun, ah... he's so much fun. such a smartass. not like minnie but one just the same.

thank you. so so much. snookies. heh. again. thanks.
ara_niey
Jul. 15th, 2008 12:42 am (UTC)
kyaaa~
i missed scarlet and his words of advice..

jae's insecurities..
i love how yun make them all vanished..

and chunnie..really love him for doing that..keke~
wedspawn
Jul. 15th, 2008 12:52 am (UTC)
smooches and snookies. thank you. i adore scarlet and i'm glad that you like him too. :::hugs:::

jae, ah. yunho has the cure for those insecurities. :D and yoochun. ah, he's fun to write for.

thank you! and snookies! :::offers cookies:::
iaminlalaland
Jul. 15th, 2008 11:16 am (UTC)
You never disapppoint before and this is no difference. This is hot and sweet at the same time. I have been lacking YunJae for the last month due to the lack of internet during my vacation, and so this hit the spot for my YunJae craving.

“Loving someone shouldn’t change how you are,”

"You don’t have to change that person to become something you think will fit into what you think a normal relationship is. Define normal for yourself, musang. That’s the only way to live.”


So true, if you have to change for the person to love you, and the love is not really true or if the person intent on changing you to fit into a preset mold he had, then you are not really what he wants, but only making use with what he has.

Love it, your works are always so good, I will certainly patiently wait for more.






wedspawn
Jul. 15th, 2008 01:46 pm (UTC)
snookies and thank you.

that's been an underlying theme in SMM... that jae doesn't have to change himself... he just needs to be. i'm certain he'll understand that. some day.

thank you for reading! and thank you for liking it. it means a lot.
fiat_amorfati
Jul. 16th, 2008 04:27 am (UTC)
sigh~~ it's good to be in love, ne?
wedspawn
Jul. 16th, 2008 04:37 am (UTC)
it is so very nice to be in love. :::nods:::

snookies.
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momo357
Jul. 16th, 2008 05:19 am (UTC)
That's such a cute fic. I really liked it. I feel bad for jaeJae though... soon, maybe, things will be better, ye?
wedspawn
Jul. 16th, 2008 05:23 am (UTC)
:::grins::: they will be. promise. because you know.... it is yunjae. they are love and snookie one another.
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sexineko
Jul. 16th, 2008 01:52 pm (UTC)
As always, this was delightful. Seriously, i think you spoil us with how well you write your stories.

You're one of the authors i read and i strive to be better, to be at your level someday, hopefully. This was beautiful and steamy, yummy yummy smex.

I like how you portrayed Jae's insecurities and how well Yunho 'soothed' him. ^^ its very... them. XD

i sound like a bubbling fangirl but i seriously can't help it with you sometimes. its your fault i tell you.

wedspawn
Jul. 16th, 2008 01:59 pm (UTC)
oh, you are so sweet. seriously, i am so grateful for your readership. i truly am. :::blushes:::

yunho and jaejoong are great to write for. they truly are.

thank you. so so much. snookies. :D ♥♥♥
jedi3460
Jul. 17th, 2008 08:23 pm (UTC)
Delicious
As always my dear your writing leaves me sated and wanting more.I know others request much from you but one day Ghiardeli chocolate covered JY would really be appreciated.Blessed Be.
wedspawn
Jul. 17th, 2008 08:35 pm (UTC)
Re: Delicious
thank you so very much. :::grins::: heh... now i have dribbled other things on jaejoong and yunho. i think i can work chocolate into the future. :::winks:::

snookies. and kisses.
jhing_tearjerky
Jul. 19th, 2008 11:32 pm (UTC)
“I think I’m going to need a new best friend. This one is expired, like sour milk.” this is my favorite line. i really love your jaechun. :)

ah, jaejoong is so insecure. luckily, yunho has ways of reassuring jaejoong that he really really loves him.

i love yunho's ways. *grins*

thank you. ♥♥♥
wedspawn
Jul. 20th, 2008 12:28 am (UTC)
:::grins:: thank you. i love writing jaechun. they are such crack. really.

and yunho...ah, he comes up with inventive ways to keep jaejoong's mind busy. :::nods:::

smooches and thank you!
herokun
Jul. 24th, 2008 04:54 pm (UTC)
I think that all the readers must fall in love with these two sentences: “There was hope in the bottom of the tea cup. Leaves swirled under the cooling liquid, dark shards of fortune broken apart from the kiss of a sip.” They are remarkable!!! After this fic, whenever having tea, those sentences occur in my mind like magic words. (I love the feeling that tea brings about and after this, I love tea more!!!)

Scarlet is my favourite character!!! <3333 She’s wonderfully maternal, always giving the sensible answer to any problems of her little boy. Even when she has not given out any concrete answers yet, her appearance is enough to comfort hurt souls. The part when Jae Joong and Scarlet having tea is fascinating. The atmosphere is cozy, safe, comfortable, peaceful, and tranquil. It’s an excellent condition for their interesting story to progress, for Scarlet’s sound advice to start. I love her lines, her opinions on true love. That’s something real existing in life but not usually shown out or easy to be seen.

“I think I’m going to need a new best friend. This one is expired, like sour milk.” No, Jae cannot find anywhere a friend as half good as Yoo Cheon. *giggles* It’s funny to read Yoo Cheon’s words. “The two of you are like lovesick cows staring over a fence.” – Perfect!!!!!!

The relationship between YunJae in this fic has changed. Yep, they are not at where they were. It’s more definite and vaguer at the same time. There are new things needing to be discovered on the base of old relationship. Something Jae Joong needs to know and Yun Ho knows how to answer. Yun Ho’s words are compendious for Jae to find a right answer and his action is strong for Jae to believe in it. The smut part is full of the aura of love!

I really love this fic, I’ve reread it for many times and I keep contemplating about it. Such a wonderful fic! Thank you so so much!!!!
herokun
Jul. 24th, 2008 04:58 pm (UTC)
Just some of my personal opinion, if they are not right with what you want to implicate, please forgive me! :P
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freezextheframe
Sep. 28th, 2008 08:15 am (UTC)
k. so. that was beautiful. and i love you for it. [massive huggle] remind me to tell you about the story this reminds me of. cause you made yunho say things that have been said to me. its sick ow much of my life is like some of the stories i read. really it is.
i go for sugery on monday. putting more stuff in me for fake teeth. yippie! only not. its going to be super easy sugery but i just dont like stitches in my mouth. they hurt and are lame. but its fun when they come out mwahaa! im a sick sick human being. but thats why people love me.
and this is going to give me very nice dreams. very very nice indeed
LOVE YOU
<3
wedspawn
Sep. 28th, 2008 04:13 pm (UTC)
smooches and hugs. and honey... sometimes sugary is nice :::grins:::: heh... and you take care of yourself. please. let me know how your'e doing. okay? smooches and love you.

:::hugs:::
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sodabrain
Feb. 26th, 2009 01:39 am (UTC)
How do you that?
I am completly dazzled by your writing skills. How do you do it?
I mean I can actually feel the emotion radiating off your words and thank you for writing this.
Oh and could I ask one small favour?
I wanted to know how you write a kiss. Like do you have any guidelines, tips or anything you can offer.
Much Love
Soda.
P.S: I know what I going to read this spring break! ^^
wedspawn
Feb. 26th, 2009 03:35 am (UTC)
Re: How do you that?
hello honey... um... this is probably a discussion left for email :::grins:::

wedspawn@vitaenoir.com

um... how do i write? i just write. i don't plan anything. i just start and then go. tips... perhaps? email me. we can discuss... kinda sorta :D heh...

and snookies...thank you for liking it!
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wedspawn
Nov. 23rd, 2009 03:41 am (UTC)
aw, thank you. ♥♥♥♥♥ snookies. ♥♥♥♥♥
yamapilovergyal
Jan. 25th, 2010 10:49 pm (UTC)
i miss you :( i just finished one of my last assignments so im taking a break, your always so lovely when you write like this <3
wedspawn
Jan. 26th, 2010 02:35 am (UTC)
ah, thank you. i miss you too. ::::hugs:::: you know me... working. :::Grins:::

ah, get some cocoa and a cookie. you deserve it!
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