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Title: Red Windmills in Moonlight
Pairings: YunJae
Fic For: winterbubbletea
Rating: R in this section. NC-17 in next probably

Summary: Continuation of Starlight and Blood.
Jung Yunho settles in Paris, alone and dissolute, after his search for a companion turns out to be fruitless. The happiness shared by Dong-Wook and Changmin leaves him aching and he has fallen into a life of meaningless pleasures, hoping to bury his longings in sin. Yet, a chance encounter with a feral and exotic Jaejoong leads the vampire to wonder if something magical wasn’t within his reach…but if only it were that easy.

Disclaimer: Not SMM Universe. This is Part One. I’ll be working on Part Two but will not be posting it tomorrow. Look for Part Two in the near future. Thanks.
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Jan. 5th, 2009 07:20 pm (UTC)
vamp fics do the boys justice *nods*

i like the type of vampire jae's turned out to be, it fits him. rambly and free :)

and junsu's vampy derriere. and min reading scouring for books :D
Jan. 5th, 2009 07:28 pm (UTC)
::::grins::: thank you honey. :::grins more:: and yes, susu's butt is spectacular no matter what. :::winks:::

Jan. 5th, 2009 08:45 pm (UTC)
I can't believe it, you wrote a sequel yuppie!!!
Why am I always so late??? I'll patiently wait for part 2 ^^
Jan. 5th, 2009 08:54 pm (UTC)
:::grins::: yep, part two is forthcoming as soon as i've got two seconds to rub together. :::grins::: and i'm glad you are looking forward to it. thank you.

Jan. 5th, 2009 11:31 pm (UTC)
You rae truly a wicked child, you have twisted me again in one of your wonderful stories.As Always your images are breathtakingly painful.The line "never leave your prey unsatisfied", conjures all kind of amazing possibilities.Many hugs, Blessed be.
Jan. 6th, 2009 01:19 am (UTC)
Re: Hi
::::hugs:::: ah, thank you. i shall take my wicked child moniker and treasure it. :::grins::

heh. i am glad that you liked it. hopefully part two will be as satisfying. snookies and chus!
Jan. 6th, 2009 12:14 am (UTC)
ldgalfjgla I loved that one <3 omg, so good to read.
I loved how Jae seemed to be a bit dreamily insane at the second meeting with Yunho :D
and the ending was so good and I'm really looking forward to the next part. <3
thank you for writing this, I really enjoyed it :D
Jan. 6th, 2009 01:22 am (UTC)
:::grins and smooches::: thank you. so much. i wanted jae a little fragile but strong. and of course elephant love.

the ending, ah... i've left things half done. so i have someplace to take it. :::nods::: oh and i have plans. muah-hah-ha. :D

snookies and thank you!
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Jan. 6th, 2009 04:46 am (UTC)
Ahhh!!!!!!!! why I have to go to work early tomorrow? life is not fair>.<

Gonna find "Chaminade’s Scarf Dance" piece to listen while I'm reading this fic ne~~~

Oh I'm sooooo coming back for this *Smooches*

Jan. 6th, 2009 04:49 am (UTC)
:::hugs::: and smooches. i hope you like it. many many hugs. :::grins:::

it's a good piece to listen to. :D
Jan. 6th, 2009 08:34 am (UTC)
'With Jae’s throat moving, the gash opened up, tearing along the too-thin skin, spilling bright red onto his pale flesh. His body strained to close the wound, knitting the jagged rip as Yunho watched. Jaejoong gulped for air and it tore again, beading drops of blood on the floor. They pearled in the dry dirt, glistening bits of life Jaejoong desperately needed.'

i feel like i wanna vomit!
was he attacked by someone?
why did he become like that?
sorry..i can't quite catch that part..tsk.

i'm glad yun came at the right time..not too late at least..*sigh*

*patiently waits for the next part*
Jan. 6th, 2009 02:09 pm (UTC)
ah, you don't know yet... so no worries. jae hasn't said. yunho will find out. ::::nods::: he's worried right now. curious will come when jae gets better... hopefully that's soon. :::nods:::

snookies and hugs.

ah, and a vomit reaction is good! :::hugs you:::: :::gives you cookies::::
Jan. 7th, 2009 12:18 pm (UTC)
Oh I love this. You captured the decadance and sin of the period & location so well. I was utterly entranced while reading. I could even imagine the color of this piece, the night, the curling smoke, the filth (both seen and unseen) and the innocence surrounded by the jaded and spoiled... your imagery is amazing. That part when you describe Jaejoong as a tiger -- wonderful. I cannot wait to read more. I love this universe.
Jan. 7th, 2009 02:07 pm (UTC)
thank you. very much. i'm happy with how this part came out. it took me a bit to get the feel of jaejoong into the words but he eventually cooperated. :::nods::: the min7en part didn't fight me but you know jae, very uncooperative sometimes. :::grins:::

snookies and i hope the next piece will satisfy as well.

thank you! :::offers cookies:::
Jan. 9th, 2009 04:59 am (UTC)
Oh!! new layout It's lovely *Q* *Hand over a casserole for new house party*

*I SPY~~~* Grasp!!!*O* A BIG red couch, a lavender bunny, an angel and YunJae graffiti.

Is this your own sketch/drawing?? WOW!! you are amazing person.
Jan. 9th, 2009 06:50 am (UTC)
:::hugs::: snookies and ah, yes it is a new layout.

actually i made the photo montage... these are all photos and graffiti that are out in the world :D well a few things are changed... :::grins::: like the yunjae heart..

:::takes casserole and offers dessert and coffee::: come on in, the couch is comfortable. :::hugs:::

Jan. 12th, 2009 10:58 pm (UTC)
ooooooooooh! why? did jae have some fight with other vamp? or because he became too weak so other make fun of him????

aaaaaaw, cliff hanger DDDDD:
Jan. 12th, 2009 11:25 pm (UTC)
:::Grins::: heh... yep, cliff hanger. but i did start part two. :::grins more:::

snookies. and you'll find everything out... well maybe everything out later :D

snookies. :D
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Feb. 1st, 2009 09:46 pm (UTC)
Oh. My. God. This is amazing... no I can't even find the right word to describe how I feel about your writing... it's so... powerful. Omg... do continue.
Feb. 2nd, 2009 12:35 am (UTC)
smooches and snookies. thank you. i'll be finishing this up as soon as i get time. :::nods::: which should be within a few weeks i hope.

:::grins and more snookies:::
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Feb. 13th, 2009 06:42 pm (UTC)
aw, thank you so much, love. i am so glad that you like it. i will be finishing the yunjae hopefully soon and get on to the yoosu.

jae's confusion is a big part of this story so i hope to keep him a bit vulnerable but strong. and yunnie does need love.

snookies and chus.
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Feb. 13th, 2009 06:34 pm (UTC)
god i just read this today and it got me hooked. @_________@

your words never fail to amaze me. when i am sad and in need of some yunjae fix - i always come to you n your words cause they fill me with so much love n something more.

i love the characterisations. jae's confusion and yunnie's kindness mixed so well - and i'd love to see how u pen the rest of their story. am hoping to read some story on junsu/yoochun too (hopefully :p) after u're done writing this. :))

thank u so much for sharing this gift of yours. u've always been an inspiration - i want to write as good as you. haha i sounded like a fangirl (which i am, no doubt) xD

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Apr. 2nd, 2009 01:50 pm (UTC)
no, jae jae didn't :::nods:::
Aug. 28th, 2010 12:40 pm (UTC)
'Nestling into the crook of Yunho’s arms, Jaejoong rubbed his cheek against the other’s chest, relaxing in the embrace.'
simple gesture but sweet =))
Aug. 28th, 2010 12:50 pm (UTC)
:::grins and hugs::: smooches and thank you :D
Sep. 3rd, 2010 09:38 pm (UTC)
I would like to point out that I HATE AU stories. I like my real person fiction and I'm not ashamed to admit it.
Vampire stories are somewhat of an exception but they really have to be well written and OF COURSE this story is fabulously written.
I don't care what your answer was!! *kidnaps you and marries you*
Sep. 4th, 2010 03:16 am (UTC)
heh... ah, this AU was... well, crack. it was crack! much fun to write. i don't normally do AU stories. i prefer to deal with modern day issues but ah, the setting was just too tempting :::grins:::

snookies! :::is stolen:::
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