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Title: On The Red Couch ♥
Pairing: YunJae (with some YooSu and Min7en)
Chapter: Nineteen
Chapter Rating: R
Genre: Slash/Relationship
Author: wedspawn

Part One: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, Se7en, 8, 9, 10, 11

Part Two: 12, 13 (Extremely Mature Content), 14, 15, 16, Comments Regarding Storyline , Se7enteen, 18, 19, 20, 21 (Lemon)

Part Three: 22, 23, 24, 25, 26, Twenty-Se7en (LEMON), 28, 29, 30, 31, 32 (LEMON), 33, 34, 35, 36, Thirty-Se7en, 38, 39, 40 (Final)

Summary: Hot Korean boys. Sex. Dancing and some angry words. Not necessarily in that order. Not necessarily in each section. Final Book in SMM series.
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Sep. 2nd, 2009 06:05 am (UTC)
♥♥♥♥ ::::hugs:::: ♥♥♥♥

aw, i did enjoy writing this chapter. i wanted to stitch together a few things that were... lingering in my mind for min and jae. :::nods::: and jae does have a focus now with min.

i try to write them a bit... complex. not just black and white. min is vulnerable and strong. and well, he is scared. jaejoong... scared but... steadier on his feet. so that's a good thing.

smooches and thank you.
Sep. 2nd, 2009 06:04 am (UTC)

changmin, strong yet vulnerable and so scared. the thought of losing jaejoong is really scaring him. i love the love between JaeMin.♥

thank you for nineteen.♥
Sep. 2nd, 2009 06:06 am (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ smooches. :D
Sep. 2nd, 2009 06:26 am (UTC)
Poor Changmin umma! It's no wonder what happened to Jae stuck a nerve in Changmin. I'm happy that they are trusting in each other again.

Thanks for posting!
Sep. 2nd, 2009 01:25 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥ snookies. poor min but ah, he could talk it out. :::nods:::

thank you for reading!
Sep. 2nd, 2009 08:17 am (UTC)
OMG..i loved the way you potrayed the emotions of min and jaejoong here...poor min..i was nearly tearing...
Sep. 2nd, 2009 01:29 pm (UTC)
:::hugs::: and thank you. ♥♥♥♥ poor min. he's... well... he is loved. and a bit scary when pissed.

thank you and snooks.
Sep. 2nd, 2009 08:24 am (UTC)
Aaahh...the bandUmma and baby talk! Both fearful of losing the other but are slowly revealing their hurts.
Hopefully with this, Jae will begin the process of healing and recover fully, so that Changmin-ah can taste his cooking once again! Lolz~~
Sep. 2nd, 2009 01:30 pm (UTC)
heh... you are as bad as changmin...thinking of his stomach. :::grins::: heh. ♥♥♥♥

smooches and snookies. and hugs. thank you.
Sep. 2nd, 2009 11:06 am (UTC)
my poor Changmin :(
that last part definitely made me cry xD
Sep. 2nd, 2009 01:31 pm (UTC)
::::hugs:::: ♥♥♥♥♥ aw, snookies.

min will be okay. ::winks::: he does have se7en to help him kiss and make it better.

thank you!
Sep. 2nd, 2009 02:15 pm (UTC)
too many tears falling from my eyes ;____; *sniff* i...gah......just....♥ goes for both of them
Sep. 2nd, 2009 02:15 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥ smooches. and hugs. :::squishes you:::
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Sep. 2nd, 2009 03:11 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥ ::::nods:::: heh... well I went with Je Je because i've seen references to some of the others call him that too. :::nods::: yoochun is... he'll be around later. anger has to be dealt with first. ♥
Sep. 2nd, 2009 03:41 pm (UTC)
I will bet mami Jae will surface soon.His baby Min is hurting, so here comes JJ to the rescue. I just want to be the fly on the wall when Yunho and Min make up.As for Jae not feeling man enough, can you hit him now or sahll I.Men ,just like women, can be made to feel helpless,useless.He needs to open his eyes and see the love that surrounds him.He is so incredibly blessed to be unconditionally love by 4 humans.Many double chocolate chip cookies are thrown your way.Blessed Be.
Sep. 2nd, 2009 03:47 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥ heh...ah, yunho and min. i will have to write their "make up scene" but ah, yes. so...growly at one another.

jae... ♥ it's harder i think for a young man to come to an understanding of who he is inside. and how that relates to people outside. buthe will work it out.

:::grins::: ♥

Sep. 6th, 2009 01:11 am (UTC)
oh min. ohhhhhhhhh. /hugs magnae ;_; i know there's a reason for his outburst. he was afraid of losing jaejoong to the eldest's own fear. and he was afraid of not being able to stop jae from slipping away. oh boy. what a complicated, intricate knot of fate.

i hope things will get better soon. it's good that jae knows how much his existence means to the others, or else he'll do something stupid like keep the hurt inside again. i'm curious about yunho. he keeps secrets too - which i think will be another issue altogether. oh well, we'll deal with it one at a time, yes? :p

my heart clenched while reading this chapter but i didn't cry. which is good news for johnson and joongie. heh. ^^;

♥ you! off to the next one now! ^^
Sep. 6th, 2009 02:00 am (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥ snookies and poor johnson and joongie. :::grins::: their ears must be so wet. stop chewing on them. :D

aw, min was so fearful and still inside he hurts somewhere. but he'll be better. much better. :::nods:::

yunho does keep secrets. he's not told jae about his mother, i don't think. :::grins::: so he as that he needs to deal with. :::nods:::

♥♥♥ smooches.
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Sep. 11th, 2009 03:54 am (UTC)
MIN!!! i want to hug him too!:))
Sep. 11th, 2009 05:22 am (UTC)
snookies. ♥ heh. min min is such love. :::nods::: ♥♥♥♥
Sep. 12th, 2009 09:31 pm (UTC)
Oh Minnie...
*huggles him and Jae*
Sep. 12th, 2009 11:09 pm (UTC)
:::nods::: min had a bad experieince and doesn't want the same thing to happen to jae. ♥
Sep. 17th, 2009 08:55 pm (UTC)
poor minnie, now i understand his anger. gr8 chptr as always
Sep. 17th, 2009 09:03 pm (UTC)
snookies and thank you honey! :::nods::: min's anger is deep.
Sep. 26th, 2009 04:38 am (UTC)

OKAY. this is time I really cried.

As In CRIED. For realz.

Min's story was more heartbreaking than any other!! DDDDD:
I just want to engulf him in a bear hug so he can stop crying!

[lol if i really do that to him in real life, he'd be looking at me like O.O xDDD and spit out one of his snarkiy comments XDDDD]

Thanks so much!!

Sep. 26th, 2009 07:06 am (UTC)
♥♥♥♥ :::hands you tissue::: snookies, honey.

min probably wouldn't snark.. okay maybe. i do adore that about him :::grins:::
Sep. 29th, 2009 11:56 am (UTC)
this one. really does reflects so much...ah. it's just sad we don't have that many yunhochangminyoosu in the world around us. not everyone is THAT patient dealing with withdrawing friends. they tried...but being constantly pushed away is really a bitch. so, i respect the 4for that.

and the fact that jae finally awaken and realizes his mistake. that is important. ♥
Sep. 29th, 2009 12:59 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥ jae does need to talk and share. because it's frightening when something big is going on in someone's life and you, as a loved one, don't know about it. ♥
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