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Broken Glass Hearts, Part 3

this is for bardou

Central: JaeChunSu
Rating: R
Genre: It's complicated.

THIS IS TOTALLY AU FROM SMM. 100% off SMM. Not in any way related to So Much Mine, Lavender Bunny or anything else.
This probably will be some hardcore NC-17 or hell, maybe fluffy. I dunno.

Parts: One, Two CutCollapse )


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Oct. 11th, 2010 03:41 pm (UTC)
Betrayed is a very strong and harsh word~~though Su might have made a bad choice by keeping quiet but he must have made it with his reasons and it may have been as hard for him not to speak up~~~does it really give Chun the right to use that as a reason to not be in love with Su anymore; I cant help but think is his love that shallow for him to say that and to be with Jae at some an intimate level but to say it's for comfort and not romance :'(

Or maybe I just have a soft spot for the duckbutt /shrugs but still he's hurting too cant Chun see..

And YunJae /sigh Yunho's such an a$$ to have done what he had in the past to Jae~~but yet Jae's now willingly going to him...I guess things can never be that simple

Thanks for the update~and sorry for my rambling the Yoosu angst just made me so...
Oct. 11th, 2010 04:10 pm (UTC)
ah, yoosu angst.... heh. it's complicated to say the least. things are never really black and white and well, i do have a soft heart for susu. he is aduckable. :::nods::: hopefully i can get him out of this puzzle.

and yunho....aish, jaejoong. :D so many things to explore in this story. very angsty but ... well.... yeah.

yoochun. he has reasons! i just have to think of them :D

smoochs and snookies. and no need to apologize. rambling is fun.
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Oct. 11th, 2010 04:21 pm (UTC)
omg! i hve ni idea whats going to happen and i like that. i am torn btwn jaechun and yunjae these days. soulmatenis drawing me in.

i like this dark universe, su being less 'sunshiny' and more dark. jae well jae is ......sexy with a potty mouth

Oct. 11th, 2010 04:49 pm (UTC)
heh... jae is always sexy. and ah, this universe... very hard to write in. i keep falling off the edge of the dark and into the pits of despair :D :::winks:::

i have no idea what is happening either. but oh.... we shall see.
Oct. 11th, 2010 05:00 pm (UTC)
oh the tears! *sobs*
a very angsty yoosu on my birthday. it's heartbreaking, but it's lovely. thank you! ♥♥♥
Oct. 11th, 2010 05:03 pm (UTC)
::::hugs::: happy birthday! :::cheers:::: we share a month! i had a birthday on the 7th! woooooot! oct babies for the win! ::::hugs again::::

eat cake.

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Oct. 11th, 2010 06:25 pm (UTC)
My heart breaks for susu-ah. First he blames himself for the destruction of the group and now he will blame himself for Yoochun. Logically I get the sex as comfort thing especially with someone you trust like your best friend but I hate the way it hurts Junsu and how Yoochun seems to think Jae's pain and feelings are more important than Junsu's. Its only chapter 3 and the angst is killing me (in a good way). Can't wait for the update and see how Junsu responds to what Yoochun said and to see the YunJae.
Oct. 11th, 2010 07:16 pm (UTC)
wow *___*
this is intense I love it.
Oct. 11th, 2010 08:17 pm (UTC)
:::grins::: thank you! i am glad you liked it! :::cheers::
Oct. 12th, 2010 03:40 am (UTC)
OMG...the last paragraph is totally unexpected. Looking at things from Chunnie's view really does make a big revealation. Before this i was only concentrating on YJ but never thought much on what Chunnie would think of Su's roll in everything. It's tough for Chunnie since he knew that Jae speaked up for Su & then got betrayed by Yunho.... Poor guy is really torn apart between Su & Jae.

Can't wait for your next chapter. As usual, i do feel that there are more things to be uncovered & i just can't wait for them LOL!
Oct. 12th, 2010 03:55 am (UTC)
i have made a tangled mess of things with this fic. :::grins::: so many viewpoints. i shall have to straighten them out, no? :::grins:::

and yes, chunnie is rather caught in the middle. poor baby.

smooches and thank you.
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Oct. 12th, 2010 08:56 am (UTC)
owh crap. Why does it have to be jun chan that screwed things up? Huhuhuhuhuhu this is so angsty =(
Oct. 12th, 2010 02:02 pm (UTC)
well.... someone had to do it... and i picked him. sorta. kinda. :::winks:::
Oct. 13th, 2010 05:12 pm (UTC)
Woah, the shit just hit the fan! This story is kicking so much ass right now^^

And yunho with se7en!?!?!?!?!?!

That made my day, like woah!

Wow, just awesome, sugoi, buonissimo^^
Oct. 13th, 2010 06:42 pm (UTC)
oh yes... it's rather... complicated. :D and aish... i DO know what i'm kind of doing for the next chapter :::Grins::: sorta. maybe? kinda? :::grins:::

heh. i am happy you liked it. snookies.
Oct. 13th, 2010 11:55 pm (UTC)
Oct. 14th, 2010 02:19 am (UTC)
::::grins:::: smooches. [_]) cocoa?
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Oct. 14th, 2010 06:45 am (UTC)
I don't even know what to say. I'm just still in shock. I completely wasn't expecting this. I just .... wow.

I've said this before a hundred different times but honestly your writing sends me over the edge and makes me want to cry... actually I did cry this chapter.

Because everything is there but its like .... not there. I don't know. All the puzzle pieces are there but something is stopping them from fitting together. And knowing that you can finish the puzzle but not being able to hurts the most.

Oh god. ♥
Oct. 14th, 2010 02:13 pm (UTC)
ah, this fic keeps going sideways doesn't it? :::grins::: and this chapter was quite raw. took me a bit to write. i knew where i was going to go but aish, how to get there. :::grins:::

smooooooches. and hugs. and snookies.

it's kind of angsty. but i was asked for angst! :D :::hugs tight:::
Oct. 15th, 2010 07:10 pm (UTC)
OMG GIRL!!!IN the middle you 're such a DAMN TEASE!!!then the ending. You weren't kidding when you said emo and angsty!!! I love it. Haven't read anything for two moth and this is the shock I get.

-->next chapxD
Oct. 15th, 2010 07:18 pm (UTC)
aren't i a tease? i've worked at it. i shall be teasing more. maybe. hopefully. :::crosses fingers::: i'm hoping to work on it later. :::grins:::

and the middle was... ah, they are love :D
Oct. 17th, 2010 08:54 am (UTC)
so that's what happened *cries*

god, people make mistakes , can't they get a second chance??

darling, this is really, but reaaally angsty
it matches my coffee
Oct. 17th, 2010 04:07 pm (UTC)
my ree wanted angst so i thought i would just write pure angst. a small piece :D ♥ and yes, people do make mistakes. definitely.
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Oct. 25th, 2010 05:50 am (UTC)
omo. the last part. haaaaay. you made me cry soooooo much. i still can't stop crying now. huhuhuhu. i feel so saaaad for yoosu. haaaay. im off to read the next chap! thanks for this! :'c
Oct. 25th, 2010 06:31 am (UTC)
:::hugs::: ah. i am sorry. :::hands you tissue and cookies::: it gets better for them. i promise :::hugs:::
Oct. 26th, 2010 10:04 pm (UTC)
omg bb i havent check on yur updates in months n i find all these *smooches* ^o^ but im down with a cold T.T heart burns to gastric problems sighhh i found it so ironic though all the symptoms that su had was like reflected on my body lol XD

but omfgdsHHH dongwook! i thought "he" was changminnie T_T. aishh <3
Oct. 26th, 2010 11:03 pm (UTC)
SMOOOCHES and hugs. :::grins::: heh... and ah, poor baby. i hope you feel better! get some sleep.

that's the problem with me... i don't update then i spew some out :D :::hugs::: snookies and feel better, honey.
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Nov. 25th, 2010 01:48 pm (UTC)
wow ! this is really a nice fic
Nov. 25th, 2010 05:57 pm (UTC)
thank you! :::hugs::: i am glad you like it!
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