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Broken Glass Hearts, Part 10


this is for bardou who wanted YooSu angst.

Central: JaeChunSu
Rating: NC-17ish for this section. Just a little bit.
Genre: It's complicated.

THIS IS TOTALLY AU FROM SMM. 100% off SMM. Not in any way related to So Much Mine, Lavender Bunny or anything else. This probably will be some hardcore NC-17 or hell, maybe fluffy. I dunno.

Parts: One, Two, Three, Four, Five, Six, Se7en (heh), Eight, Nine CutCollapse )

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ch0cola
Oct. 27th, 2010 12:19 pm (UTC)
awww... the last sentence nearly made me cry <333
wedspawn
Oct. 27th, 2010 03:26 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥ hands you tissue and cocoa. ♥♥♥♥♥♥
effectingyou
Oct. 27th, 2010 12:28 pm (UTC)
finally yunho's going to open his mouth and talk xD lol
wedspawn
Oct. 27th, 2010 03:26 pm (UTC)
he is! hopefully! :::crosses fingers::: ♥♥♥♥
anime76
Oct. 27th, 2010 02:02 pm (UTC)
Interesting help from an innocent by-stander. hehe...Yunho just needed some good advice from someone who has been there & made some tough decision.

It is me or the first thing on their mind is sex? LOL it is because it's YJ or because they are both men hahaha......
Got to say sex is sort of getting in the way now since both of them are avoiding/suppressing their feelings for each other. But it will be explosive when the made up (^_^)

Such an innocent walk & then suddenly you have set the perfect scene for them to be alone and seriously talk about their r/ship. I like it. Nothing flashy, just simple everyday folk & surrounding. Somehow it gives a grounded atmosphere - like how their r/ship should be heading.
wedspawn
Oct. 27th, 2010 03:31 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥ smooches and hugs.

i did want to ground their environment around them. sometimes taking the characters out of the familiar and exposing them to others who can offer insight is always a fun thing to do. a bit hard sometimes because well, jaejoong tends to be an asshat in cooperating but usually okay. :D

and yes, sex is a major part of what's lingering in their minds. it is a boy thing. definitely so. :::nods::: of course you know... they're not hard on the eyes.

i am glad that you liked it. thank you! ♥

smooches and snookies.
atobekazuki
Oct. 27th, 2010 03:00 pm (UTC)
LOVE LOVE LOVE.

XDD Can't really type eloquently while one hand has buttery popcorn. ♥♥

wedspawn
Oct. 27th, 2010 03:31 pm (UTC)
mmmmmmmmmmmm popcorn. i love buttery popcorn with curry and sugar.
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agnetalovek
Oct. 27th, 2010 03:49 pm (UTC)
omo omo omo *nodd* agree. You're his rock. Lean onto him or hold him dowm. Don't let him go a second time!!!
wedspawn
Oct. 27th, 2010 05:06 pm (UTC)
:::grins::: you are so cute.
hitomi2oo7
Oct. 27th, 2010 05:49 pm (UTC)
*squeal* OMG~~! YunJae is getting ahead with their story at last~~! I wanna know mooore ^o^
wedspawn
Oct. 27th, 2010 06:19 pm (UTC)
:::grins::: they are! i just now need to write it :::Grins more:;: smooches.
reya13
Oct. 27th, 2010 06:36 pm (UTC)
“You should drink the soup and get some of the noodles in you,” Yunho said, holding up another mouthful after blowing it cooler. “Once you eat enough, I can begin to tell you how much I love you and why you’re the rock I should be holding onto for the rest of my life.”

WAAA
this is great!!
don't tell me yunho finally woke up from coma and has his minds back kekeke
wedspawn
Oct. 27th, 2010 08:49 pm (UTC)
heh... he does. he will... but first! i need some sleep before writing chapter 11. or 10...or whatever number i'm on :::grins:::

heh. smooooooches.
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ting5
Oct. 27th, 2010 06:48 pm (UTC)
A lovely couple, and wise words from the ahjusshi.

Now that Yunho has kept that in mind he just needs to deal with prissy Jae before they embark on their reconciliation path :)

<33
wedspawn
Oct. 27th, 2010 08:50 pm (UTC)
poor jae. prissy... pffts. yunho was feeling su up! i'll get into that later. :D

smoooches and heh... snookies.
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damaged_psyche
Oct. 27th, 2010 11:12 pm (UTC)
So sweet! <3 Old people can be very wise sometimes. Looking forward to the next chapter!
wedspawn
Oct. 28th, 2010 01:56 am (UTC)
heh... poor things. they're not THAT old :::grins::: okay maybe :D

onward to writing next chapter! :::CHEERS:::
rinmi
Oct. 27th, 2010 11:16 pm (UTC)
lol yun sounds like se7en abit at the end XD lol i think i like this yunjae more than in smm universe. they are much more interesting n fun to read. hehe still catty jae is win XD
wedspawn
Oct. 28th, 2010 01:58 am (UTC)
heh :D ah, this yunho is a bit more... angry. but then things are different in this world :::grins::: and it's fun to play with the characters :D

thank you!
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symphonic_love
Oct. 28th, 2010 04:01 am (UTC)
I applaud yunho for being able to deal with jae..I would've just taped his mouth shut or something xD and I like his attitude! for once he's talking back and being snarky :D~

aww and romantic yunho is sweet~ they're finally going to talk, but why do I feel that it's going to include more fighting? xP I like the flow of how things are going ^^ it sorta shows that no matter how much yunjae fight they'll still look out for each other in the end, even if the other party isn't too keen on getting their help ^^"
wedspawn
Oct. 28th, 2010 04:10 am (UTC)
heh... ah, jae is... difficult sometimes. but that's the best part of what yunho loves about him. sometimes the fierceness is turned to the outside.... and god help the world :D

heh.

ah, i shall see what happens in chapter 11.

snookies and hugs!
corinaidao
Oct. 28th, 2010 05:08 am (UTC)
OMG. I started reading this and I'm so sorry I cannot comment on all chapters coz it's so beautiful. Just amazing that I can't wait to read the next chapter. I hope you update soon!!
wedspawn
Oct. 28th, 2010 05:18 am (UTC)
aw, thank you. i'm working on 11 now. okay well not RIGHT now. right now i'm working on my character in rock band but i'll have chapter 11 up probably tomorrow :::grins::

smooches and i'm glad you like it! thank you.
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cherjae
Oct. 29th, 2010 01:03 am (UTC)
Yea.... Talk is good... Thank god for the noodleshop uncle to knock some sense into yunho.... Ifu miss the rock then you will just sink.... Hopefully the rock won't be difficult. Ha but looking at his history... Hmmm
wedspawn
Oct. 29th, 2010 01:06 am (UTC)
heh... the rock is always difficult.

it is a rock.

:::grins:::
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wedspawn
Nov. 1st, 2010 02:44 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥ i know.
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