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Broken Glass Hearts, Part 12

this is for bardou who wanted YooSu angst.

Central: JaeChunSu
Rating: NC-17ish for this section. Just a little bit.
Genre: It's complicated.

THIS IS TOTALLY AU FROM SMM. 100% off SMM. Not in any way related to So Much Mine, Lavender Bunny or anything else. This probably will be some hardcore NC-17 or hell, maybe fluffy. I dunno.

Parts: One, Two, Three, Four, Five, Six, Se7en (heh), Eight, Nine, Ten, Eleven CutCollapse )


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Nov. 1st, 2010 05:18 am (UTC)
OMG do men like Se7en exist irl?
Can I have one?

There's so much tension in the YunJae part... and I can't wait until they both realise and work through their feelings for each other without snapping at each other.

mmmmm... steamy Yoosu. Looking forward to the follow-up to that hot sexy session too lol
Nov. 1st, 2010 02:40 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥ yes, men like se7en exist. usually they hook up with crappy girlfriends that make you want to grind your teeth so grab one if you see one! immediately! because you need to save him from that fate :D

yunjae... so much of the fail. and of the win. :::grins:::

and yoosu. god, i hope i write good enough smexing for them :D ♥ snookies.
Nov. 1st, 2010 07:31 am (UTC)
OOOOO so next chappie will either be lemon or someone interrupted them :P
thanks for the update :)
Nov. 1st, 2010 02:43 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥ oh yes, lots of lemon. i have two lemon scenes i have to write for. :::Grins::: and well, manuevering yunjae to at least someplace lemony :D
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Nov. 1st, 2010 02:44 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥ heh.. i know! i have to contemplate lemons.
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Nov. 1st, 2010 02:44 pm (UTC)
verrrrry possessive yoochun :D ♥
Nov. 1st, 2010 01:07 pm (UTC)
YJ - aish...they still have a long way to go. It sure is taking them a long time to get back to the apartment. Hope they will have some time together once Jae has rested to discuss about their r/ship. This is the pair i worry the most. It's just so easy for them to go from super fully & sexy to super angsty - u just can't predict how they will handle things...

Yoosu - LOL finally some real action? Congrats guys for finally taking the final step to commit to each other ^_^ *throw confetti*

Min7 - Good question? who is the bottom LOL! Love how i can go from LOL to 'aw..' when it comes to this couple. Min might looks hard on the outside but he is such a softie on the inside. Se7en just needs a little patience & lots of brain cells to keep up with Min ^_^. Small little things in life really are what matters here. Love all the little but oh-so-importing things Se7en has done by himself.

Can't wait for next chapter
Nov. 1st, 2010 02:49 pm (UTC)

yunjae. so complicated. really of the three pairings i write, they are the most headache causing. i can't seem to keep them on track to smushy lovemaking. and i think they're avoiding their lives right now. i'll address that next. :D

yoosu. yep. lemon confetti for them. i just have to write it. :D ♥

min.. i don't think min was expecting that so i'll have to figure out what happens there. and yeah, he's a softie inside. poor se7en works hard to keep up with him :::grins::: smooches. ♥
Nov. 1st, 2010 04:32 pm (UTC)
My kind of chapter, a bit of something from each of the couple though I want more JaeHo =p
Nov. 1st, 2010 04:41 pm (UTC)
heh... i'm working on them :::grins::: smooches.
Nov. 1st, 2010 04:47 pm (UTC)
Love to see your updates after my hectic day! Thank you.
Nov. 1st, 2010 04:49 pm (UTC)
smooooooches! thank you!
Nov. 1st, 2010 09:41 pm (UTC)
yay all three pairings are in here :D~

the yunjae seem to be patching things up, but still have a ways to go...but I don't think that they can always stay super angsty or lovey dovey for a long while ^^" there's always something there to rupture the balance between the two

yoosu getting some action :) that's quite a possessive chun, but at least now he's showing his real feelings for su and not holding back

awww se7en is so sweet~ lol who's topping really is important :P
Nov. 2nd, 2010 02:50 am (UTC)
it was hard to work them all in but yay! finally got them going :D

heh... yunjae is... explosive. passionate and a bit mental sometimes i think :::grins:::

se7en's open to anything and oh yes, chun is VERY possessive :D
Nov. 2nd, 2010 12:24 pm (UTC)
now we have some action :D
but the yunjae...
Nov. 2nd, 2010 02:01 pm (UTC)
heh he hheh.... smooooooches and yes, some action! :::winks::: snookies.
Nov. 2nd, 2010 08:05 pm (UTC)
I rarely read fanfiction but yours are the best. I always look forward to new stories unpatiently.
Gambatte! And thank you :)
Nov. 2nd, 2010 08:22 pm (UTC)
aw, thank you so much. :::blushes::: i am grateful for your support and reading these. thank you.

Nov. 3rd, 2010 04:45 am (UTC)
Oh... got a bit behind and♥
Honestly... I was feeling so crappy earlier and this brought up my mood
Nov. 3rd, 2010 04:49 am (UTC)
♥♥♥♥ oh i am sorry for your down mood :::offers cookies::: i am glad this was here to help. smooches and snookies!
Nov. 3rd, 2010 06:31 am (UTC)
OMG you stop in right in the midle of sexy scene!!! *LOL*
can't wait to read LEMON for the next chapter *kyaaa*
the prince of romance ...: Se7en ... Changmin should be happy with him hehehehe
Nov. 3rd, 2010 02:06 pm (UTC)
:::grins::: ah, lemon. i need to gird up for lemon :::winks:::

smooches. and thank you.
Nov. 8th, 2010 12:29 pm (UTC)
se7en ~ ♥
i am so looking forward to the yoosu smut. *grins*
Nov. 8th, 2010 06:08 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥ heh. there is some yoosu smut coming along. very slowly but it is.
Nov. 10th, 2010 05:09 pm (UTC)
i need to make an altar for you (god forgive me ^^' )
this is too great

and i'm even happier to read them cause i have more chpters to read :D
Nov. 10th, 2010 09:22 pm (UTC)
:::grins::: you are ... awwwww... just thank you ♥

heh... well this fic has been... angst! ANGST! i've never actually gone hardcore to focus on just angst and man it's rough :::Grins::: heh.

thank you again. smooches.
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